Torch Dragon True Lord, Ridge-Seizing Bandit Chief

Your book title is so low-class. A True Lord is a tomb raider? A tomb raider can be called a True Lord? Who are you insulting?

In the tomb raiding genre, among the authors on Qidian, yours is the most readable. It's a pity you haven't become a big hit; one book after another has been cancelled. It's frustrating for you. I hope you'll rise to fame soon and become a legend, making money!

I'm too scared to vote anymore. This is the third time I've released a new book; I really don't know if I'll ever finish it.

It's about to be sent, but they insist on bringing up that period of history from the late Qing Dynasty. Hatred isn't innate; if you're indifferent to that history, what emperor didn't kill? Didn't Zhu Yuanzhang implicate countless people? The princes of the Zhu family were ruthless, Xiang Yu buried Qin soldiers alive, Bai Qi buried surrendered soldiers alive. Writing novels with such hostility and stirring up emotions will only hurt yourself.

Still no female lead? I dropped the last one because it didn't have a female lead.

The writing got worse and worse, and towards the end, it was unclear what the theme was. Was it about tomb raiding and the martial arts world, or about establishing a new dynasty for the righteous? Was the title even the main plot? And people were even abandoning their cultivation levels, and the winners were simply let go? Would someone who wanted to kill the protagonist's entire family be let go? It's all so confusing!

The overall narrative is smooth, and the plot is relatively tight, but there are three major flaws. First, the timeline and historical background of the time travel are problematic. The narrative suggests that the protagonist travels to 400 years after the Hongwu reign of the Ming Dynasty, roughly around the time of the Qianlong reign of the Qing Dynasty in real history.

Not bad, not bad. The protagonist is ruthless at the beginning to win people over, showing the potential to become a powerful figure. Hopefully, his character won't change later on. Many novels' protagonists immediately become naive and clueless young men the moment they have contact with a woman.

Why not kill that old mudfish?

I think the author writes very well. I remember the previous book, "The Mountain-Moving Taoist," had a great plot, told in a captivating way, and the mountain-moving and cave-exploration scenes were very engaging. I hope the author won't cut this one again.