Torch Dragon True Lord, Ridge-Seizing Bandit Chief

The title of your book is too cheap. A true king is a tomb robber? A tomb robber can be called a true king, who are you insulting?

You can read the gold-grabbing and tomb-robbery part among the authors listed on Qidian. It's a pity that it's not a big hit, so I've cut one book after another. I feel helpless for you. I hope you can make a name for yourself soon and become a god and make money.

I don't dare to vote anymore. It's the third time I've released a new book. I really don't know if I can finish it.

If I want to send it, I have to mention the history of the late Qing Dynasty. Hatred was not brought out from the mother's womb, and she has no feeling for that period of history. That emperor didn't kill people, and few people were implicated in Zhu Baba? The prince of the Zhu family eats people, let alone spits out bones. Xiang Yu traps Qin soldiers, while Bai Qi buries and surrenders soldiers. He writes novels with a violent spirit. Inciting emotions will only hurt himself.

Still no heroine? I abandoned the last book because there was no heroine.

The writing got worse and worse. By the end, I no longer knew what the theme was. Is it tomb robbing and rivers and lakes, or to establish a new dynasty with righteousness? Is this title the main plot of the book? Moreover, there are people who want to abolish their own cultivation. If they win, they will just let him go. Does someone want to kill the protagonist and let his whole family go? What a mess

The overall narrative is smooth and the plot is relatively compact, but there are three poisonous points. The first point is that there are problems with the timeline and historical background of the time travel. The narrative should be four hundred years after Hongwu in the Ming Dynasty, which is probably around the real history of Qianlong in the Qing Dynasty. However, it is obviously an imaginary historical world. Whether it is a reverse fight or an antique, it all relies on historical knowledge. How does a different world connect to the historical knowledge and antique knowledge of the real world? The second point is that this is already an extraordinary world. If you don't think about cultivating immortals, you still have to fight around every day, covet a few taels of silver, kill chickens with a sledgehammer, and the power system and narrative logic do not match. The third point is that the protagonist lives in a bandit den where he is the king of the mountain, surrounded by a pack of wolves. Every time he goes out to fight, the leader comes out with all his elite leaders, and he doesn't think about how to defend his home. How does he survive in troubled times?

Not bad, not bad. In order to stabilize people's hearts, the protagonist is ruthless in the beginning. The protagonist has the potential to be a hero. Don't change the character of the protagonist later. In many novels, as soon as the protagonist comes into contact with a woman, he will directly become a virgin young man.

Why not kill that old loach?

I think the author's writing is very good. I remember that the plot of the previous book "Taoist Moving Mountains" was very good and eloquent, and the plot of moving mountains and exploring caves was very attractive. I hope the author will stop cutting it.