People Are in Douluo, the Chat Group Is Tongguo Manga

No... The first two books you posted on QQ Reading were not in line with the trend there. I thought that if you changed to QQ Reading, you would continue the previous ones, but you ended up posting this way when you came to QQ Reading? I think it's normal for you to say that you posted on QQ for reading. After all, the chat groups there are pretty much the same, and everyone understands them. But if you start posting this one... I'm not very optimistic about it. Now I see that you just keep taking the wrong path. When you posted it on QQ Reading before, my buddy said that QQ Reading is not suitable for slow-burning books. It is suitable for books that are more bloody and more poisonous so that more people can read them. Two chapters a day are even more unprofitable. Now you are back to the starting point... Writing a book in this style makes me feel that you have been infected with QQ Reading's internal flavor... I think you are going to escape from the outline again.

Let's do a math question: the number of deaths in the city of killing. How many people will die if a killing god appears?

How many cubs can a 100,000-year-old female rabbit give birth to? How high can Tang San's hat be stacked?

There are too many things written that have nothing to do with the protagonist. Why do Zhang Lingyu and Li Muxuan write so many plots? I still have to skip reading.

If there are any particularly big problems with Tang San in the first part, just accept them and adjust them slowly.

The author mostly writes about Douluo, a man who can destroy dragons, ghosts, and even fires.

It's a bit creative, but really not much, and it looks uncomfortable in many places. The author probably wanted to write a protagonist with both ordinary people's emotions and a complete growth path. Unfortunately, due to lack of ability, the audience in Douluo is not very good, and the description of growth is very average. The protagonist's character does not look like a time traveler, but more like the author's psychological portrayal.

There are typos in the introduction. Do you want to be so exaggerated? It's acceptance of fate, not appointment.

It's out of the main plot, I'm just skipping to watch it

Nowadays, under one person, Xia He is whitewashed, and there is nothing to see anymore.

I hate novels that add settings at every turn

Add some stacked box king at the back, um, what about immortality, dragon talisman, covering the sky trilogy, monsters are coming, infinite fear and so on. Even a piece of rubbish can be rubbed up. I don't know what will happen next. 😄😄😄

There are two problems. One is the protagonist's current attitude towards Tang San, which makes Tang San seem a bit too imbecile. He will believe whatever he says. Also, regarding Tang San's attitude, to be honest, it's easy for some serious people to call him a double standard. If you can change it, try your best to change it. Another difficult point is that the titles Zuo Ruotong and Laotianshi are difficult to comment on. Even Zuo Ruotong called Zhang Jingqing Heavenly Master at that time. It would be a bit difficult for you to just call him Heavenly Master. You can just call Tianshi directly, or you can call him according to your age.

After reading it for a while, to be honest, the first few chapters were pretty good, but when I got to the master, it was as if I had lost my wits, and all my previous caution was gone. It was like killing people who said something unpleasant, just for fun.

It feels like there are no good people in other systems except chat groups. After experiencing a lot of world travelers, one or two are still idiots and do not advance the plot. Treating fools as enemies doesn't accomplish anything.

To harvest luck, shouldn't the first thing be to directly sell the Vast Sea Universe Cover to the system?

After all these years, I really can't stand the writing on chat groups. It's still the same routine after all these years, and it's also a type of writing with a lot of dialogue. 😅

It can't be like this. The chat group next door just grabs Douluo to make fun of themselves, and you grab Douluo to write this book. What, you two are sitting at the same table?

Theoretically, according to the heat, shouldn't the sun and the moon be at the same time?

Zhenhun Street Assassin Wu Liuqi The Same Mistake of the Sun and the Moon Legend of the Dragon King Chuanwu Master of the Spirit Tie Ji Steel Soldiers Seer Hao Brother Corpse Fire Phoenix Starts a Prairie Fire Dzi Bead Transformation Qin Shi Mingyue Biao Ren Fantasy animation will be added later. In this way, there will be early accumulation so that the combat power will not be out of touch, and the combat power will not be particularly expanded.

Should the author try to pull Jiang Mingzi?

Are there beauties from the world of Nine Songs?

Will all beauties be collected and is there a book club?

It's so troublesome. When will Dou Er's transition be completed?

Pull Don Bilian income