Naruto: the Beginning Lets Orochimaru Return as King

Tsunade didn't know that the reincarnation of the earth was a bit ridiculous. Originally, the story about Orochimaru's return as king was quite exciting, but it turned out to be unsatisfactory once the story got deeper. Even if Tsunade didn't know about the reincarnation of the filthy soil at the beginning, but she was eager to summon the rope tree when she found out, why didn't Tsunade resurrect the broken and the rope tree in the original novel? People in Japan are very repelled to disturb the peace of the dead. Tsunade can't let the dirty soil reincarnate into the rope tree and the broken tree. To her, it would be a blasphemy to the soul!

The dialogue has no emotion and is full of AI flavor. It is full of cause and effect. The blank space of the words itself is filled with this kind of thing, which does not highlight the personality of the character. This feeling is further amplified in the fanfic. After all, most readers have watched the original Naruto. Overall, the ideas are good, but it's hard to make people want to read on. Maybe it's because I often use AI. The above are all personal thoughts.

Why is AI so strong? Can you use less AI when writing a novel?

One glance at Ding Zhen, the absolute beauty was written by AI, it tastes so good

There is no need to read garbage using AI

There are many famous names in the Land of Fire... The AI ​​flavor is really strong

I'm laughing so hard. The biggest worry for the protagonist is that Hiruzen Sarutobi didn't beat him to death when he was talking nonsense. I didn't expect that there are still people who think that the protagonist does things neatly.

This is the shortcoming of AI writing. AI is inexperienced and has no sensibility.

I won't talk about you when using AI, because I use it too, just be more restrained. What the hell is it that I picked up fragrant phosphorus on Duanzhu Street? The age is wrong, the place is wrong, everything is wrong, it's too dramatic.

Kaoru's age is wrong. Kaoru is about the same age as Naruto and Sasuke, at most one year older. Naruto hasn't even been born yet, and Kaoru is already four or five years old. I seriously doubt the author has watched Naruto.

The plot is very taken for granted. At the beginning, the nobleman himself was used to demonstrate the heart transplant experiment? Imagine that one day you went to the palace and told the emperor that you could replace him with a heart, which was like returning to youth. The emperor asked you to disembowel a prince without any hesitation? Is it reasonable? And the Daimyo of the Land of Fire directly asked the third generation to step down and let Orochimaru succeed to the throne. Have you read the original work? How did the 4.5Th generation shock the Daimyo with one look?

Anyway, they are all written by AI, so I will just remove the title of your VIP chapter and let AI write it. Aren't you going to explode?

It's not that you want to provoke anything, it's just the author. Don't be too arrogant, you know?

When I saw Tsunade, I felt a little bit poisonous.

From where the Sage of Six Paths jumped out, Tsunade and Orochimaru were stilled to prevent Kato Dan from resurrecting. I didn't want to watch it from the beginning.

I can't bear to see the daimyo depose Sarutobi Hiruzen and appoint Orochimaru as Hokage! Hokage is a double jade system! The daimyo leads the Ninja Village in name only! In principle, the daimyo has no right to interfere with all personnel appointments and transfers in the Ninja Village! When a new "shadow" is created, you only need to submit a notification to the daimyo, and the daimyo will give his symbolic consent! I have never heard of a daimyo being able to remove or appoint the "shadow" of a ninja village.

Use American AI, it smells like translation

Author, I want your book cover

But the author's update is indeed somewhere between Niu A and Niu C

In fact, there is a problem here The Hokage and the daimyo are equals The election of the Hokage relies on internal selection in Konoha Village, and then the daimyo is notified. Shimura Danzo, who brought the daimyo in during the selection process, was equivalent to an act of humiliation and humiliation for the country Give the daimyo the best privilege to intervene in the internal autonomy of Konoha and the village. What the protagonist does is actually similar, right? Where does the name come from? Influence Naruto.

I haven't even finished reading the first one, but there are a lot of typos and misspellings.