Conan: Hu Mingmei at the Beginning, Undercover Winery

Are sisters 🤔

Poisonous points: 1. Some people in the comment area think that there is an element of licking towards Fei Yingri (although the wife is very attractive, she is too good for no reason), and the scene with Yukiko is not bad. 2. The researcher part feels a bit weird recently. The more you participate, the more loopholes you leave. When Shuichi Akai is investigated later, won't everything about you be revealed (look forward to the foreshadowing later) 3. Lawyer Princess Eri can tell that the protagonist is from the police academy (although there is the bonus of Morirou), but Gin has dealt with so many undercover agents, so the characteristics of police training should still be visible, right? (Personally, I don't think it makes sense). If you add a drama, you will be discovered later as soon as you think about it and investigate (no way of knowing for the time being) Advantages: 1. The demolition of CP is well received, although only Miyano Akemi is demolished now. In order to give the beautiful women who suffered in Conan a home, I strongly support it 2. Miyano Shiho's section really touched my point. I like the development of this plot very much, including the section of the research institute (although the plot is a bit weird), but an isolated and helpless person is suddenly protected. Even a tsundere can't resist this full sense of security

Are you dismantling all of it or only part of it? In other words, do you break up couples or break up couples?

No plug-ins, no cheats, but still writing Conan fan fiction? ? Even the basic logic is gone. You, a Chinese, had nothing to do before time travel, and you have no ability to do justice. After time traveling to Japan, you are full of justice. Even an international criminal organization like the winery that kills people and has all-round methods dares to risk your life. . Damn, author of Japanese rape

I think it's okay. As an old bookworm who likes to read Conan, my evaluation is: Being able to read it smoothly and sometimes making me smile, it suits my need to kill time and soothe my mood

The demolition of the concubine Eri was okay, but the demolition of Yukiko seemed abrupt. At least for those who have watched Conan, Yukiko was not easy to demolish. And if the author went all out to subvert Kudo Yusaku to demolish it, it would be a bit offensive.

In fact, the writing in the early stage was okay. Although it was a bit private, it was generally within the acceptable range. As a result, after it was released, the protagonist became more and more independent, and some miscellaneous supporting characters were also introduced. It felt very boring, and I couldn't be selective about food.

The male protagonist is a stallion and abandoned, so the harem is opened without logic.

A living little figure, don't look at it

What the hell was it written? Chapter 360: He was captured and watered. Chapter 5: The protagonist mobilized all forces to find him. It turned out that it was Akai Mutake who captured the protagonist. He said that he felt safe with him, so he didn't take him away? I was convinced. I really thought there were good people in the Akai family. They acted against the will of God and immediately persuaded them to leave.

Those who like to watch the harem are in luck, Fei Yingli will definitely not be able to escape Those who like to watch a more reasonable version can withdraw. Fei Yingli started this plot with something wrong... She and Mouri Kogoro are just separated. Without an opportunity, you cannot have too close contact with her.

How can you live in that world without a golden finger? Why don't you give me a diamond kidney, invulnerability, and the ability to carry a cauldron?

Yukiko, Bermod, Princess Eire, Miyano sisters, Ran, the Suzuki family received a lot.

The biggest feature of Lao Mo's Conan fandom is that there are a large number of black and gray calculation and struggle techniques that are simple and direct in logic, but inexplicably practical, reasonable and highly targeted (that is, combining and applying things that everyone knows at will to create various operations that many people would not think of but are reasonable), and other Ke There are only a few Nan fanfics at most, but they are found almost everywhere in the whole book and are used very naturally. Only the Conan fandoms written by Lao Mo since he was a consultant barely have "I have read a lot of related books and movies and integrated them well" or "I have a lot of gray social experience" written on my face 🙂

After chapter 400, it simply doesn't look like something written by the same person.

It's been over a hundred chapters and I'm still licking it😅It's been so long since I've written it, but the plot of Mingmei is too watery and boring😅

In Chapter 179, I feel that the author has a sharp head. He was still on the boat and told Shirley that he didn't want her to watch the protagonist kill someone. He then wanted to kill a woman who had a one-night stand. If Shirley hadn't stopped him, he would have killed her. Sjb, it's understandable to kill criminals, but now I'm killing a woman who had a one-night stand. The main character is pure CS. I also exchanged values ​​with Shirley later. I'm convinced and won't watch anymore.

Let's talk about the advantages first. It's better than the previous one. The writing is smooth, the plot is logical, and the dialogues are fairly consistent with the characteristics of the characters. Disadvantage, the protagonist has no sense of mystery at all, just like an ordinary person. Both for red and black, they are extremely ordinary soldiers. Excellent protagonists are either physically ahead (like Conan the Witcher) or mentally (like Conan the Psycho), but your protagonist is too average. Moreover, the details are not handled well, the female characters are not written delicately and tactfully enough, and the interaction with the protagonist cannot be grasped (just like Fei Yingli, the plot of taking care of the sick is more suitable for Loli Ai, the lead sister, etc. Why is a middle-aged woman in her thirties pretending to be weak; Yoko is in debt, and the protagonist takes her to dinner, can she eat it? She also packs it for her roommate, this is pure enough). The connection between writing and writing is also a bit stiff The summary is barely readable, but the emotions are not delicate enough and there is no sense of substitution.

It's not interesting. It's a classic harem fan. The purpose of a harem is to have a harem. It's a classic harem. It's not a buddy. It's just for fun. You still have to pay attention and lick. You are also a spy. Who can't play in the beginning of Black, so you still want to lick? There is no big trick in the game, so you are not afraid of anything. You want to lick and play spy at the same time. You are not afraid of danger to your family. It is extremely fragmented. It has the aesthetic feel of a fanfic from 15 years ago. All in all, I feel that the plot is mindless.

It feels a bit like AI writing. I wrote it at the beginning, but immediately contradicted it later.

Yingli can see it, but Gin can't? One word poison

Starting from the episode about going to the United States, it's really hard to describe in one sentence. It doesn't seem to be written by the same person. I seriously suspect that Lao Mo has conducted some secret py transaction. Is there anyone who knows the inside story who can tell me what's going on? If not, you can provide me with Lao Mo's address so that I can send the blade 😁

Not a good harem story. What are these dozens of chapters about?

So you started scribbling?

Here you go, Shen Nong, I have been recommended this book "Guiding Poison" several times. How is it?

The new book you mentioned by the author cannot be found at all.

Still not as interesting as getting a golden finger

The author is so miserable, Conan's house collapsed 😅 I wonder if it will affect the fandom

Looks great, cheers!

All the tickets are for you, come on!