Naruto: Who Taught Them to Practice Like This?

After reading the first chapter, I felt that it was very boring. The author kept talking about his views on the ninja world through the mouth of the protagonist. There are only a few sentences to promote the plot. It is hard to imagine how boring the chapters will be after it is released.

The protagonist is very hypocritical, saying that he is not interested in Hinata, but in the end he cuddles her, makes Hinata strip naked and carve his own exclusive gravity sealing technique on Hinata's body (later he writes that he is afraid of being discovered by using this sealing technique), and then gets hard in front of Hinata. Written like a greasy middle-aged man who abducts a minor without any clues.

You, the author, are terrible. A simple dialogue of less than ten lines has been extended to two chapters by adding inner drama. You must have been a master of composition since elementary school. In the future, when you get old and go to the doctor, you will be able to sit down and chat with the doctor for an hour.

If you want to have a harem, just open a harem. Why do you always ask the protagonist to set up a memorial arch?

There are too many inner dramas, as many as water numbers

After reading it, the idea is relatively new among Naruto fans. It can be said that it has played new tricks. However, the emotional line is not well described. It is like abducting a minor. Sometimes I say it is just a child, and sometimes I cuddle. I feel that the idea is wrong. If there is improvement in this aspect, I believe the results will be better.

After watching it, I think it's pretty good so far, but the main character is so frustrated that I felt uncomfortable watching it.

How did a good imaginative article turn into a pornographic article? What do you want to write?

Sandai is both stupid and bad. This is too much evidence to crucify him. Three thousand Yuan Fei Ninja Army, you have such a big stomach! The Uchiha clan was eaten, the Uchiha clan was exterminated, and the assets and ninjutsu were not in Sasuke's hands. Thousand Hands Human Experiment, I remember his son failed to awaken in Mu Dun. The fourth generation couple should at least leave two jounin-level assets and ninjutsu. Naruto had nothing, his grandson had a personal trainer all year round. White Fang's death, allowed to spread rumors. Weak to the outside world and forcing Hinata to sacrifice her clan members, she wanted the clan leader in the first place! If it weren't for Hizashi, it would be Hizashi who died. The Uzumaki clan is destroyed. Every day the Will of Fire is talked about, all the people dying are teenagers and children. The strongest Hokage in the world has no record. I think you want to write the third generation as a helpless Lao Deng, which is a bit unappetizing. The ideas are good, and the emotional scenes are somewhat interesting, but the three perspectives are inconsistent.

I don't think there's anything to criticize except for being a little scummy. The protagonist is a scumbag, but there are multiple female protagonists and the male protagonist is not a scumbag. It's pure hypocrisy to say that I'm not a scumbag. If you have a strong sense of morality, it's not suitable to watch multiple female protagonists. Just watch Pure Love.

The relationship progress is more delicate, not the kind of mindless post, the protagonist's brain circuit is a bit deviated from normal people

The storyline related to Hinata and Ino's female protagonists is okay, but the addition of the phosphorus line is extremely blunt. It's so bad that I suspect the author didn't study the original plot of Naruto at all. Even if he wanted to open a harem, he didn't force it like this. It's disgusting.

The author has read the last few chapters and I want to delete the book. Brother, willfulness is the privilege of the strong 😅. You don't care about this or that, the Flying Thunder God returned to the Land of Fire in style, and they were more panicked than you after disappearing for two months. Let me choose between Pencun or Shayin? What a joke. Now that I have disappeared for two months, I throw back the multiple-choice question. Do you want three rebellious ninjas or do you want to compromise with me? At worst, half of Konoha will be sunk🤫

Genius-style protagonist, raising Hinata Ino, worth watching

Don't look at the first few pictures, they are too watery, almost watery.

But Gochi loves Chi😋😋😋 (Girl Hinata's cute pinch)

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All of Naruto's BD builds are chakra based. The same goes for weapon BD. No kind of BD that endures can escape from chakra. Weapon throwing has little future. In the end, the plot also switched from weapon throwing to artifact control.

When I saw the chapter titles in the recent chapters, I didn't want to click on them. What the hell were they written about? Bored, I want to see the river of blood. Other people write that Naruto's love story is just a component, but for you it's the main line.

The fatal thing is that if you have a 20-second CD, you have to wait until the fight is over to write down the plot before you can use it.

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