The Beginning of the Apocalypse: I Sell to Zombies for Performance

It can be seen that the plot is quite interesting. You sell the shelter and then sign a contract with the protagonist. I have a lot of ideas when I see this. For example, the protagonist and the person selling the shelter run it and generate supplies, and then the protagonist rebuilds the entire order step by step through sales. The creativity is quite good, but the details of the plot are too convenient. First, the plot is too negative, which reduces the popularity of the protagonist. The second is various emergencies, such as erasure, disgusting forced orders, etc. Those are too abrupt. The system should be silent. Are you writing the system like this to steal the show, in order to highlight its strength? Finally, I recommend that you study "My Perfect Apocalyptic Life", explain the plot clearly, and be more positive. You will be half successful, and the rest depends on your ability.