The Sword Comes Out Completely

Is Huang Rong still a child in The Condor of Gods? Author🙂

I just don't understand. What obligation does Emperor Duan have to save that child? It is already a great mercy for him to let the adulterer and adulteress go. Yinggu still hates him. I want to ask why? Does kindness deserve bad luck? Even if Qiu Qianren's intention is him, he should bear the blame. He doesn't owe them anything. What's the logic? ? ?

In my mind, the martial arts style of this book is becoming more and more like the New Three Kingdoms, including but not limited to always drinking, walking through the portal at starry night, and the two conspiring to trigger the eavesdropping mechanism. Cao's art of war, the third uncle and the fourth uncle, the dragon is the symbol of the emperor. Fortunately for the emotional scene, there is no heroine dancing for the guests. (But there is still an eavesdropping mechanism)

As soon as Huang Rong came out, Li Mochou became invisible. If you like Huang Rong so much, why didn't you just write Huang Rong as the first female protagonist?

The three religions of Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism did not gain their status through martial arts. Many authors have downplayed and emphasized martial arts. This is because it is not easy to write essays on Taoism.

. . . Li Mochou is much younger than Huang Rong. . You've got it reversed here. . It is recommended to check before writing. . It's not easy to make a mistake

In fact, this book is quite well written, but I don't like Huang Rong. I don't like the harem either. I saw Huang Rong appear in Chapter 13. The fate is over, I wish the author good results

The writing is good, but one thing to note is that there should be less plots about the knotted wings. In the plot, the female protagonist does not interact with the male protagonist and instead looks like a lily. This is not good. The protagonist really has no sense of presence in the emotional line.

So Guo Jingli really wanted to laugh when I saw many authors accepting Huang Rong for their poor work. Li Ping gave Guo Jing his life, and Huang Rong gave Guo Jing his soul. Guo Jing was trained by Huang Rong bit by bit, just like a painting is painted bit by bit. Can those who accept Huang Rong meet this requirement? Huang Rong is essentially a witch, and Huang Rong is 100% unwilling to accept a harem because her father gave her a template.

I just started watching it, and I have a question. Shouldn't all the third generation disciples of Quanzhen be Zhizi generation? It should be called Zhishu or Zhiwang! Why is it called Wangshu?

The writing is okay. I haven't seen the shadow of Zhutian yet. I just hope it doesn't lead people through time. I have always been disgusted with the idea of ​​taking people through time travel. A world has a world of people, and a world of rules. After leaving, time will be suspended. Before the end, just go back to the sea and return to the sea. This way you can also write a different opening

That's not right! If you enter the ancient tomb through the water pool, you won't encounter anyone in the ancient tomb at all! Entering is the secret room of the ancient tomb, which no one in the ancient tomb knows. You didn't leave the coffin, how could you meet the people from the ancient tomb?

The settings in the first few chapters are eye-catching and quite innovative It would be a pity to write one sentence about the world, it is better to write something original. Personal thoughts after watching the movie: The characters and plot trends later conflict inexplicably with the settings of the original work, which makes people slightly uncomfortable. For example, Li Mochou took the male protagonist to the Ancient Tomb Sect for an "engagement", which was too light and untested, and deviated from the sect's requirements for the union of Xiao Longnu and Yang Guo.

The writing is very good and the descriptions are smooth, but the plot is not very reasonable. It is very unreasonable to see the deep pool leading into the ancient tomb. The Zhongnan Deep Pool leads directly to the Chongyang Stone Carving Secret Room, without entering the ancient tomb at all. If you want to have an intersection with Li Mochou, you can find another way. This change is too contrary to the setting and is not good.

The plot is over, the protagonist is invincible, and 500 chapters of the plot are written in 50 chapters.

In the original novel, Xiao Longnu indeed knew about the Double Ninth Festival inscriptions for a long time.

Why do people still praise it? All the curses have been deleted.

There used to be a novel by Zhao Zhijing that was good, and another one that lived up to my expectations while writing it.

Does the author like Lily so much? You don't plan to rely on Lily to maintain the male protagonist's harem, do you?

I have read more than ten pictures. Does the author want to write a lily novel about Huang and Li?🙂🙂

This author still has something good in writing about little girls. Putting the selling point of Li Mochou in the title of the book may attract more readers and more accurately attract the target audience. For example, "The Condor Shooting Begins by Abducting Fairy Chi Lian". There is a book with a similar title before. You can search for Fairy Chi Lian. (ps: It's just a suggestion, everything is still based on the author's ideas)

There are a lot of bugs like this in Jin Yong. To be precise, all martial arts novels related to dynasties have more or less bugs. In comparison, fictional martial arts novels and Gu Long have fewer bugs. For example, Wanyan Honglie of the Jin Dynasty actually believed that Wu Mu's suicide note could extend the life of the dynasty in the later period. For another example, most of the masters of Guo Jing and Huang Rong are used to fill the line in Xiangyang, rather than to assassinate the opponent's rear ruling areas (it is completely possible for the Beggar Gang to collect information and then send the masters out, refer to the behavior of Yang Guo in the end of the Divine Eagle to have the opponent's food and grass burned). In my opinion, it is difficult to cause damage Far lower than maintaining law and order (refer to the middle and late period of the Anti-Japanese War), of course it is undeniable that it is Guo Jing's behavior that makes this character charming For example, there are so many idiots who think that if they get the dragon-slaying knife, they can become the supreme martial arts master or even the emperor. Don't they know that big fists are tough? Does it make sense Another example is Hong Qigong casually entering the palace (can the emperor sleep well if there are no masters around him?), And Wang Chuyi and others entering the palace casually (referring to the fact that this kind of combat power is used to assassinate, I can't think of what the opponent should do. The palace is still guarded by masters, what about the middle and lower-level officials?) Another example is the Murong family To restore the country, he does not have many of the conditions for restoration (food, territory, armor and weapons, dead soldiers, intelligence networks, financial capabilities, martial arts masters, leading talents, political talents, etc.). Well, Fengbo evil and Bao Bubutong still offend people everywhere, many with friends and few with enemies. Also, Murong Fu's ambition to restore the country was so bad that he didn't even know that he needed to be shameless if he wanted to rebel? There are countless bugs to study in detail, so it can be said that these novels cannot be studied in detail, so just read them as cool articles For another example, Murong Bo actually thought that killing Xiao Yuanshan would allow Song and Liao to start a war (the Song Dynasty wanted to pay for the solution. Liao just collected money, but it was not good, so he had to fight life and death?) For another example If these things are done in the martial arts world, Murong Fu just wants to restore the country. This book is okay.

The writing is first-rate, not bad.

Double income, right? ! ! Faster and faster! ! !

Quanzhen can't get married, isn't it Wudang?

The book is dead and the daily guide is available 🙂

Have you seen the useless A Gu tampering with others?

It's very beautiful and I like it very much.

Have you considered installing a wave of "Shattered Void" before leaving a world?

Is there a new book on Gu Long Wuxia? The ancient dragon heroine is so miserable