Perfect Cultivation of Immortality Starts from Knowing the World Line

The idea is good, and the overall development is okay, but I have a question. In addition, will the self in the world line lie to others, because some of them are particularly miserable and have a particularly bad character. If there is a hole in the story, how will the protagonist deal with it?

The subject matter is quite good Every time I watch Tongchuanliu, I have a question. Why do I think that the other person will help me unconditionally? Not to mention that the experience is different, and the personality may be different. But even if you practice advancedly, then there will only be one self in all timelines and parallel times. So how can we divide them among so many selves but only one Daoguo?

If you rely too much on the mirror, the subsequent content will be easily homogenized.

By the way, isn't this on the shelves yet? So many pictures

The work is pretty good, but sometimes the writing is a bit too messy, and the writing suddenly jumps to another place.

It's okay, pretty good.

There are just too many words, which affects my reading.

Generally speaking, the creativity is okay, but you have not grasped the plot. The early stage will involve the dispute between the Taoist factions in this world. This should be something that starts in the mid-term. As a result, your current plot is dragging. You have been thinking about which faction to join for forty or fifty chapters.

The idea is indeed good, but the plot is unreasonable. There is such a golden finger, it should not develop like this