Today's Test Was Still a Big Failure

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The setting is somewhat interesting, but the background explanation is unclear, the organizational actions are abnormal, and the narrative of the novel is so fluid that it's hard to explain (

The setting is interesting, but the plot is too blunt, so it needs to be polished.

The biggest problem currently seems to be when new settings are introduced. Normally, all characters should undergo an adaptation process of reshaping their outlook on life, but in this article, everyone seems to take it for granted, which makes people feel really big-hearted. It reduces the sense of substitution and rationality. Another point is that when facing emergencies and other unexpected things, normal people should have emotional fluctuations, such as shock, surprise, incomprehension, etc., But all the characters in the article are obviously lacking. In this way, everyone appears to be a fake person. A very typical example is the supporting group of police officers.

Emotions are the soul of characters. No matter how gorgeous the setting is, the characters in the novel are very indifferent when faced with the specific plot, so it is absolutely impossible to create a three-dimensional image. The author's current writing is too dry, almost all narrative drives the plot, and even makes people feel like a running account. The author should add more dialogue and character description

The setting looks good, but the feedback is very annoying.

Why is the protagonist called Swimming Cup? What a weird name.

The names of the male and female protagonists don't sound pleasant to pronounce, and I don't know why. It just sounds very uncomfortable.

Not bad, come on.

The setting is quite good, but the progress of the plot is too jumpy. Suddenly it becomes supernatural, and suddenly there is something spiritual behind it.

? Why does Qidian always recommend eunuch books?

I was a little curious at the beginning, but I couldn't continue, especially when I suddenly got the evil eye.

It's pretty, just to my taste

It's very good, the information is dense, and the story is quite interesting, but there are some detailed logic issues that could be refined. But overall, the flaws cannot be concealed.

Is it a eunuch if it's not on the shelves? A bit interesting