Starting from Helping the Girl Next Door, He Started to Sweep the Entertainment Industry

After reading Chapter 43, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The main plot is sticky. I wrote a lot about high school classes, but there seems to be no memory points. They are basically "What happened on my way to school today, what happened when I got to school", and then repeat. There are quite a lot of supporting characters, but I can't see any tendency or role. The protagonist is a licking dog and has a goddess, and there is a tea match next to the goddess. I write dozens of words to describe it from time to time, but then there is no plot. I have a female best friend who, like my brothers, writes a little bit at a time and can't see any other direction of development. I have a brother who is a fat guy. I don't even remember whether he has money or not. He can't be said to be good or bad. Then everyone else in the class has no description? ? Anyway, I have no impression. Then based on the content, I guessed that the author should be a person born in the 90s or even younger, promoting Jay Chou's songs to big stars in a different world. Those who can't see the reason why I say this are probably those born in the 90s. You don't know that Jay Chou's career can be divided into the "Jay Chou" stage and the "Dr. If there were no noble people who invested in him at that time and paid for the radio station to play more of his "regular songs", he would never have had a chance to get ahead. So when you arrive in another world, if you try to promote his songs with a strong style, there is a high probability that they will be thrown out and laughed at. Literature and art are extremely stubborn and changeable. It depends on whether you can make the "authority" or the "public" accept it. For example, the domestic "Youth Singing Competition" was once divided into "academic" and "fashionable" based on the judges. When the academic judges dominated, let alone Jay Chou, all singers who were not from academies could not get a ranking. Talking back to this book, I think the biggest problem is that the rhythm is not good. The narrative is straightforward and lacks the focus. Chapter 43 of talking about trivial things still doesn't leave me with a clear impression. Will such a book be full of water after it is put on the shelves?

I overestimated you. Other people's systems are quite innovative, but it's a pity that the first chapter is full of clichés.