Please Don't Have a Filter for the Extraordinary

There is nothing wrong with God Haotian😁

Haotian: Children, my title has been robbed Zeus: Children, I have also suffered from Jehovah Inanna: Children, I have not only suffered from Jehovah, I have also suffered from his prisoner Fengzhu Maria Lilith: Children, I am not a devil

This emotional scene was a highlight for me, it was classic and cliche, too fast and too abrupt. The rest is okay, but I feel like you're a little bit overwhelmed.

There is no need to write the latest chapters like this. Simply explain that your soul can be preserved on the magic web. You can also tell them that you are an official user of the Magic Network. Anyway, others already know that the protagonist has awakened independently.

The basic skills are relatively solid, the pace is moderate, and I am up to date without realizing it. It would be better if you could change the cover. This cover is a bit discouraging. Changing it to a two-dimensional or fantasy style will increase the number of new readers.

So why is the leader of heaven called Haotian?

It's pretty good, but no one has commented on it. I can give it a 9 out of 10 rating just for the settings. The characterization is pretty good, the writing is smooth, and the jokes are not obtrusive. But some of them are incomprehensible, but it's like the price of something is my shortcoming, not its shortcoming, so it's at the level of others. Overall, I give it an 8.5. Please keep updating. I wish it a great sale and recommend reading!

Looking at it so far, the love line should be a single female protagonist?

Hi hi hi hi! I grew up reading this book, Kick Me When I Grow Up, Fire Tongs Liu Ming.

Although the world view structure is not well done, the content is very good, and the setting is not so entangled and is worth watching 😁

After changing the ritual, isn't the master a magical girl?

Hiss, when I saw the name of the protagonist, I suddenly realized that something was wrong. Wang Chen, isn't it just one point different from Yu Chen? Not to mention Shang Qing, which is homophonic with Shang Qing. Isn't this one of the Three Pure Ones, Lingbao Tianzun 🙂.

The setting feels good, looking forward to it

It's good to read. The last book I read that was somewhat similar was actually the tj in a certain six, and then it was tj again, so the author, you have to hold on, crush the alliance as soon as possible, kill through hell and conquer heaven.

The background settings of the various forces and realms are well written, and the character creation is also okay. The plot is relatively average, and there is room for improvement in many aspects. For example, the trope of netizens being acquaintances is an old trope, but once it's written, everyone loves to read it. The plot of identifying one's identity in this book is very bland and loses some of its fun. Another example is the proportion of descriptions in various aspects. For example, in the picture below, the protagonist goes to school to be a teacher and has a conversation with the dean. Readers definitely don't care about the class schedule and the polite words at the end, so they can go through these paragraphs in a simpler way. Similar questions are more obvious in some places earlier, but I just read this and was too lazy to go back and read.

But it's almost 100 chapters and it hasn't been published yet, I'm afraid it's not 💊

Are there any more updates?🙂