Mortal: Fifteenth Level Sword Cultivator

The previous videos were quite normal, but after coming here, I suddenly felt that the first few pictures were premeditated, as if they were specially written for novel tweets. The content in the video is very good-looking, and then it starts to stand up again, and water + dying hero appears to save the beauty + the male protagonist is ruthless and all the women are in unrequited love. After that, the man is forcibly written to death, so that the woman (Xin Ruyin) immediately falls in love with the protagonist (for example, you can write Mo Fan to death for Mu Ningxue across France, write Tang San to death through Douluo, write Luo Feng to death through time and devouring, write to death Ren Xiaoli through time-travel sequences, and repeatedly emphasize that you do not engage in love) 🤭 In the article, three chapters are devoted to rescuing Nangong Wanshui. Nangong Wan died in the next second, and the protagonist rushed to the rescue. If the distance It's okay to say hundreds of miles, but the distance is only thirty miles. During this period, Nangong Wan broke through several times and talked to everyone in the Ghost Spirit Sect several times. The protagonist successfully rescued and ran away in the blink of an eye (the speed was a snail when he came, and it was light when he left), and when he ran away, he didn't forget to take the "Fiancée of the young master of the Ghost Spirit Sect" from "Frigidity" 🤭 These contents seem to be deliberately catering to those readers. , But want to retain the readers, no matter which readership group reads it, it will be very awkward 😰 The biggest advantage of this novel is that the writing is not novice, the plot is good, and the difference between the realms of mortals and the Great Wall of Sword Qi is well handled. If you want to read this novel, it is recommended to skip the plots where a woman inexplicably falls in love with the protagonist, which really affects the viewing experience 😥

It's so powerful, a mortal's fighting power is not as good as a sword. Mortal Dao Ancestor is equal to the 14th level of Jianlai, or the pseudo 14th level. After seeing your comparison, Chen Zhenghua (the author of Jianlai) laughed.

Why do I feel like I haven't read the original work?

It was so uncomfortable to watch. He even gave Zi Ling a name. He was obviously involved in this matter. He just didn't care and took care of Model Han several times. It was a bit licking. The result is that the Mianyinmen don't care about it. Even if they catch up on the latest, they still look like that, which is disgusting to look at.

Too pretentious. And, it's completely inhumane. Han Li is not annoying. Although Han Li is utilitarian and self-interested. But he is not mercenary. He has a bottom line, humanity, and humanity. What about the protagonist? A living and pretending cultivation machine.

The name of the sword is water 😥😥😥 It's so cool that it completely lowers the quality of our protagonist.

Zhang Tie finally saved you and got into the carriage, right? Don't want to save? ? It doesn't change, and it really tastes like the sword. Hypocrite

Seeing that Yanjiabao is about to capture the protagonist as a slave, he still doesn't draw his sword, which is not in line with the setting of sword cultivator. There is no sharpness at all. No wonder the monthly ticket has not moved much for so long.

The sword is higher than mortals. . . , To be honest, when it comes to influence, groups, and consolidating the world setting level, Jianlai is a small spiritual world below mortals.

If you can guess the name of Lu Jianghe's natal flying sword, you will receive a red envelope. The amount is not much, 50rmb. (Two words, including water.) Interested readers can leave their comments in the comment area.

There are many poisonous points, literary youth disease, and if these authors don't write about this kind of independent-conscious "doppelgänger", won't they be able to write articles? The Yin Shen looked at me for a while, and the Yin Shen looked at me and laughed. The Yin Shen also made decisions on my behalf, and then flirted with a bunch of women without accepting them. If you don't accept them, don't write this kind of plot. If you haven't read Jian Lai, you will be confused when reading this book. No wonder you have no grades

Author, are you going to write about a protagonist who ascends from the human world to the spiritual world? There is no such thing as a system, how do you write it? Even if you drag the human world, you must at least become an immortal. Otherwise, how can you get such great power? It's easy to destroy it.

You said that the protagonist has participated in a series of battles in Jianlai, so he must be a great swordsman, but I didn't see his will as a great swordsman at all. I only felt his arrogance. The character is a bit OOC. I felt very awkward after reading a few chapters.

I can't stand it when I see you being dragged from the mortal world to the spiritual world. Not to mention that I like being a saint. Why are you able to bring it there? Can I still read your novel if you forcefully bring it there? 😰

This kind of writing style twists the plot, and at first glance, it looks like a QQ reading master.

The subject matter is a good one. But the author is too low-key and can't handle it. What are you writing about?

What are these latest chapters about?

Is this a female channel? If you want to accept girls, be decisive, or try to avoid them.

First of all, I will continue to read this book, but there are a few points that I am a little tangled up in. First, from the perspective of your character design for the protagonist, the protagonist is a character who has his own heart and bottom line, is a chivalrous swordsman, and puts humanity first. In the beginning, you are lying on the road in trouble, and are carried into the carriage by Zhang Tie and others. In the world of mortals, Zhang Tie is a character who has good intentions towards you, and the protagonist also knows the novel "Mortals". Don't just save it casually, go to the back and circle it, Han Li can't mention Xuan Gu and seize the body of so and so among the companions? Then there is no need for Zhang Tie to write, just write that he has not set foot in the world of immortality. It's a bit fragmented, and the protagonist's character is instantly destroyed, and you can't stand up at all. Second, you know Han Li's future achievements. It doesn't matter whether he takes the bottle or not, but if he doesn't take the bottle, he won't have a good relationship? When I was in Qixuanmen, I was taught some physical training or some small skills. The protagonist wanted the spiritual herb but was not going to take it away. At that time, you wrote that Han Li and Zhang Tie showed the bottle to the protagonist. Why didn't the protagonist tell Han Li directly how important this bottle was, and he couldn't tell anyone about it to outsiders? Show that you know this is a huge treasure, but you won't take it away. The main character should be written in a more grand and arrogant way. He knows that this is a great treasure, but after meeting Han Li and others, he will not take it away from him. Be direct, write down the use of the treasure discovered together, and then explain it, and then say that the treasure was discovered by Han Li and he will not take it away, etc. Every time he exchanges things with Han Li, Han Li gets spiritual herbs, and the protagonist gets him elixirs. If you want spiritual herbs, don't touch them when they are easiest to touch. I don't understand. Third, if someone offends others without knowing it, I can accept it without killing them. But there is a plot where the protagonist sets up a stall, and he takes action against the protagonist and kills him. Then the protagonist showed his strength a little bit, and others saw that the situation was wrong, apologized and let go after a few words, but they didn't understand. Are these sword cultivators who fight all the time? Others take action first! It doesn't matter whether it's right to create the protagonist's state of mind in this way, but it doesn't conform to the readers' views at all. Fourth, I didn't understand the death of Clan Leader Wang and his wife that I just wrote about. The two of them came to the door and asked you to name your daughter. If you did, the hind legs would die. ? ? Why, you are a sword cultivator, and you also want to express that the protagonist, a sword cultivator, is related to "chivalry" and "righteousness". The front feet are in contact, and then these two pill formations are not some evildoers. The protagonist was rescued unexpectedly? There is an intersection, and you are willing to give a name, and then what if you, a person with a more upright personality, don't save people easily? In fact, if you don't make contact, you will die. If you make contact, you will die. Then if I don't save him, what kind of righteous character is he? I later tried to make up for it, saying that I was in retreat. Then during the retreat, the Yin Shen told the two girls that the Yin Shen would protect them from worries. Where is your Yin Shen? The protagonist is not written at all, what kind of person he is, and his behavior is a bit conflicting. Be insidious, self-interested, passionate, or chivalrous, but don't be inconsistent. But the novel has just begun. I hope you can write better and better. After all, there are not many fan fictions that mortals can read. I will continue to follow up and take a look

I have absolutely no idea that the main character has mastered all sword skills but has no swordsmanship, and that he can chop with one sword after another. What kind of broken swordsmanship is this? Doesn't he have magical powers in swordsmanship? He has become an immortal even though he kills a person of the same level and still has such ink marks.

I no longer have any hope for the protagonist's love life. I just hope that Han Li's Taoist companion will still be Nangong Wan. He will not have the protagonist as a big brother and end up with his wife. This is too tragic.

This novel is really dad-like, using a didactic tone and explaining its own logic...

Originally I thought I could endure it until the Kunwu Mountain dungeon, but now I really can't bear it anymore. I feel like I was force-fed a ton of dog food.

Not tight😠

I feel like this book is about to be finished. There is a book called "Mortals, imitations of spiritual treasures from the heavens" which was very good at the beginning. The monthly ticket cost thousands in a single month. Later, I became invincible and kept frying fish in the human world. I blew up hundreds of dozens of chapters, hitting here and there with hammers and hammers, and then the monthly tickets There are only fifty or sixty, and all the readers have run away, leaving only eunuchs. This book is similar to that one, and this book has a debuff compared to that one. It writes a lot of women who are having affairs with each other all the time. Stallion books are already disgusting, and ambiguous books are even more disgusting than stallion books.

Every day I feel less enterprising

Mortal worldview + prehistoric setting, Mortal: Rebirth in Yellow Maple Valley, Awakening of Eighty-nine Mysterious Skills, author, come on

Hey, let's give you a monthly pass! It's not easy to stop being a eunuch!

I guarantee it with Han Li's Taoist companion and son

Don't rob Nangong Wan, don't rob Nangong Wan, don't rob Nangong Wan