Born as an Orion, Martial Arts Master

After reading dozens of chapters, I would like to briefly share my feelings. First of all, this article is considered to be a good one so far. It can be seen that it has a certain outline. The plot is a little bit cliché, that is, it is a classic grassroots rise and gets involved in a big conspiracy. The overall writing is not bad, and it is worth reading if you are in a book shortage. Secondly, let's talk about some flaws. First, and the most uncomfortable thing for me, is that the author does not seem to be good at using quotation marks. He often uses quotation marks incorrectly, making it difficult for people to tell which sentence is talking and which sentence is psychological description. The handling of this aspect can reveal the writing style to a certain extent. It is recommended that the author make some modifications in the writing process in the future. Secondly, the gold finger setting in the early stage was relatively confusing, and the values ​​often appeared to be high and low. It may be that there was no uniform adjustment during the deletion process. Some readers who look more carefully may feel uncomfortable. Moreover, the presence of the golden finger is not very strong. It may appear too frequently, making it difficult for people to feel the effect of the golden finger personally. In other words, you can just call him a genius, but this golden finger means little. Thirdly, in terms of the rhythm of the writing, I feel that the plot progresses a bit too fast and too simply. The protagonist feels like he is just running around and suddenly gets involved in the conspiracy. The handling of some plot transitions is not interesting. Furthermore, the characters are too flat. I don't know if they have military sentiments. The characters in the military camp all feel like a group portrait. Some people are unconditionally good to the protagonist. I feel that there should not be so many good people in this kind of grassroots rise setting. In general, the writing style is relatively novice, but it is worth reading. After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't feel engaged. Maybe the plot is the same, and there is nothing new in reading.

The number of words in "Shui" is very professional, but the constant "skills" and so on are very abrupt and embarrassing.

The story is okay, but the writing style is too young and can easily lead to drama. It's watchable, but at least it's not imbecile. The newcomer's words are very impressive.

This is a fantasy novel of the original style. The plot advances slowly in the early stages, but it gets better and better as it gets written later. Please give your best to the author.