Immortality and Demon Cultivation: Start with the Book of Cause and Effect

The plot borrowed from Mo Xiu is smooth and not too toxic. But the first copy of your original creation is very problematic. First of all, why does the protagonist enter the dungeon? For resources. You start by asking the protagonist to tell you the secret of Mingjingsha. This is okay. If there is a chance to seek greater opportunities, there is nothing wrong with it. However, you did not design more benefits for the protagonist. As a result, your entire copy, which is quite long, is meaningless. Moreover, you also wrote about another group of people in the parallel world in the copy, making the plot and dialogue confusing. You want to say that the purpose of this copy is to make friends? I have something to say. The protagonist is in a demon sect. You have already borrowed from demon cultivators to write about the atmosphere of the sect in such a ridiculous way. Now you make friends with these disciples, and even spend a lot of pen and ink on the protagonist to win the favor of the senior sister. What's the use? Unless you are going to write a million words on Qi training, how much help can this senior sister and even her master be to the protagonist? It's worth writing like this. You can write about making friends with them, but what do you mean by designing this crappy copy just to write about making friends with them? Why does anyone read Mo Xiu? It's because it's so well-written from the first chapter to before it collapses, and the characters are really distinct. An experienced author would not have written this kind of meaningless spiel in the early stages.

I wish all readers a prosperous new year, good health, and delicious food. May the whole family be happy and everything goes well!

Reading the introduction is just like Bai Teman's new book

This update! ! Is there a 1,000-word chapter? ? ? ?