Beginning in Liyue to Attain Immortality

This is an article about cultivating immortals, and it is wrapped in the shell of Teyvat. Many settings have surpassed Teyvat's settings. Immortals can transform from elemental creatures into humans and become immortals. Immortality has changed from a system that only some people can obtain to one that everyone can set foot on. The realm of cultivating immortals has also been added. The innate energy of cultivating immortals is a mess.

The author's writing style is still too immature, and the protagonist he portrays is like a reckless high school student.

Chapter 29 to Chapter 31. These chapters are a bit too discouraging, they are all set pieces. The content of these chapters, the author, can actually be divided into several short stories. When the plot characters interact, they are told through the mouths of the plot characters. Your dry setting is very discouraging to readers. As for the content about playing with the red rope, the author can also arrange a plot that requires the red rope to be taken off, and let the protagonist hold the red rope and play with it. Rather than just setting it up here. Directly setting up this situation will only show that the author's writing skills are stretched.

I thought he was an immortal

Genshinya Rina

Genshin Impact

Genshin Impact

I keep writing according to the plot, which is boring

Is this fairy from Teyvat, or some other version of fairy?

From time to time, there will be a paragraph about the writing of a wheel. Quite annoying. Delete it. I really hate this kind of author who tries to force the way of writing a wheel. Let me give the author a suggestion. I suggest you take a look at Star Train's Journey to the Heavens. This guy is also a big fan. But that guy's water is not like the author's. You use the method of a wheel to harden the water. He completely wrote the fan plot as a romance. It's a bit similar to your technique, but I'm a little better than you. I won't force myself to play with the wheel here. He forcibly opened a small romance theater based on the original work. It's quite interesting to watch. At least it won't be boring. For a person like you who is prone to wheeling and turning, it will make you feel quite disgusting if you do it a few times.

I can't stand it anymore. I suspect that I'm just fooling around with Genshin Impact.

Looks good, keep updating, has been collected

I'm really convinced. I invested in this book before it was signed. There is no dividend after the contract is signed, and there is no dividend even after it is put on the shelves. Does the investment have to be done at the moment of signing the contract and the moment it is put on the shelves? TMD

Genshin Impact

The plot was too confusing. I had already attended the banquet with Barbara, but it seemed like I hadn't seen him before. I asked if I wanted to meet him.

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