Spell Return: My Spell Is Called Kamen Rider

What is the invincible flow of early development? 😨

I don't really understand that I can set a special effect by myself, but the protagonist claims that he only has numerical values ​​and no mechanism, but actually sets a special effect that stacks numerical values. As a result, he is worried that he is too weak and does not take the initiative to stack special effects. So why not just set a special effect that invalidates other people's mechanisms? It can also give full play to the power of its own numerical values, and no matter how bad the special effects are, it should be to capture other people's spells. Otherwise, no matter what, you will not be able to make up for the mechanical flaws you mentioned. My character is even more heavyweight, I find everything troublesome, but I still end up causing trouble. I find out that I can't afford to mess with other people, so I just run away. I also deliberately let people run away and let them sue their parents. The parents couldn't run away and were taken in as dogs. I am invincible. This protagonist has been corrupted by God's will. The best ending is probably to commit suicide.

I have just recently pursued the Curse Return War, and suddenly I realized that there is no world more suitable for the Uchiha clan in Naruto than the Curse Return World. I remember correctly that the greater the negative emotions in the curse world, the greater the power of the curse. Similarly, the greater the negative emotions of the Uchiha clan, the stronger the power of the eyes, and the awakening ability becomes stronger and more complex. It is a type that becomes stronger the more it fights. Furthermore, after the negative energy of the curse is converted into positive energy, it can produce healing and other abilities. It can also replenish physical energy for the Uchiha and restore the power of pupils and eyes. It's so suitable, but why doesn't it seem that no author has written a similar article from this perspective?

Real person: Emperor Tiger, right? Don't be afraid of the children, watch my domain unfold OUT!

It's so hard, I'm speechless when looking for the curse and the knight. I've read more than 20 chapters, and the overall feeling is that the knight is just an appearance, basically of no use. Xia Youjie caught him at the beginning of the curse plot and started nagging.

Do I need to explain it every time I switch forms? Disgusting enough

It's another invincible start, a diaosi style of writing, and a self-contradictory plot. I'm optimistic about you. The last one I wrote like this reached chapter 130 and I couldn't finish writing Eunuch. It's still on my list of books specially created for eunuchs. I'm optimistic about you and you may become the next one.

Spell return, Kamen Rider elements, if you don't like it, you can leave

Invincible Wen is not invincible? Learned a lot

The author has a huge misunderstanding about field expansion. Open fields are still fields and have the same sure-hit effect, but there is no barrier to prevent people from escaping. Therefore, in exchange for a larger range, it is not an open field that gives up the sure-hit effect! Moreover, the only difference between ancient and current field expansion is that one only has a sure hit, and the other has a sure hit and a sure kill. There is no open field that belongs to the ancient field expansion.

Seriously, how do you keep reading? From the fifth to the twelfth chapter, there are endless explanations, and there are piles of settings and setting explanations, and the explanations are still confusing. I really can't watch it.

Inexplicably getting together with Xia Youjie, this arrangement is simply a defense

There's not much to write home about in the world of spells, right? I feel that no matter how much I write it, it is not as good as jjxx's design. It is better to bring a spell-returning system to travel to other worlds, with various spells (including curse spirits), various physical talents (six eyes, Yi Bone curse power, fists and black flashes, half-human and half curse spirit, Tianyu Tyrant), various spell tools (Prison Gate Frontier, Tiannibo)

There are too many explanations, and the writing of Sky and Tyrant is too weak.

What can be explained clearly in two sentences is enough to cover a page, and a lot of introductions are repeated. Readers are not babies, and you don't need to introduce them in such detail over and over again, not to mention that this is a fan fiction.

I feel that if the author does not consider the following three points, this book will be terrible~ First, how to arrange the villain? Knowing that the plot is a gold-finger level in any original work, especially in the cursed world, the plot line of this world is too thin, and the villains are too weak. If a protagonist who knows the plot joins, I really don't know how the villain side will win. Second, when will the protagonist get hard? The most attractive thing about Curse Return, apart from the prison master, is that the combat is exciting. For now, the protagonist has always been a sneaky person. If this phenomenon does not change before it is released, problems will arise. (The author's book now gives me the feeling that I am really anxious for the protagonist, but I don't know what to be anxious about... Because, based on the strength of the protagonist, it doesn't really make sense to have him or not. If you don't do anything, you can completely run away, but if you don't run away, you can change the plot. To be honest, as long as you change a little bit of any link, the ending will be reversed... Such as: the wall-breaking villain plan... Complaining that Tianyuan is a scam... Beep, you still have Ou Doudou named Tiger Stick... And so on) Third, does the change change the plot line? Same as mentioned in the two above points, the plot line of the Cursed World is too thin, almost non-existent, and the time is too tight. In general, there are only two major events "Shibuya War" and "Death Exodus", but the two are so closely linked that they are separated by more than ten days of plot time. If the protagonist changes the plot line, then these major events are basically impossible to happen again, which is equivalent to directly cutting off most of the interesting points of the book. An original major event? Author, no matter how good your writing is, a large number of readers will not buy it. Likewise, if you don't change the plot, a large number of readers will say, "If you don't change the plot line, it's better to read the original work..." Etc... It's rare that I finished reading Chapter 1 recently and found a book with good writing. I just want to ask how the author plans to solve these problems? Here are three more complaints from my heart: 1. It's better to write that the protagonist doesn't know the plot~ 2. The protagonist's plug-in is really rubbish. I can't imagine how the protagonist can fight Wu Tiao and Su Nuo~ 3. What on earth is the protagonist doing~ If he becomes stronger, he will have the ability to swallow the magic power every day. No, the little curse spirit is too small, and the big one can't take the turn of the protagonist. The devouring power is still one in a thousand. Killing a thousand special-level ones will only increase one special-level combat power. I want to make money and run away, but I still hang out with the protagonist's group every day. I want to change the plot but are sneaky. What on earth does the protagonist want to do~

That book has a lot of crackles at the beginning, but when I finished writing it, I thought, oh, don't you just have a weird stitch? The sky is bound to the universe. Chaos Reconciliation, and then Soul Binding, it's so bad.

I would like to ask if Zhutenliu will be written in the future. If there is only one spell, you will be considered good at writing 200 chapters. After all, compared to the sea of ​​​​death fire, the original work can only be regarded as a short comic. If there is only one world, the results of the rest of the book should be average.

Just for my defense, if you want to run away, just go back to China from the beginning. If you want to write a plot, don't do it so disgustingly.

The human dialogue could be more refined. Characters often speak in long paragraphs, which makes the impression very poor.

I returned to China for no apparent reason, but I don't feel like the map has gotten bigger, which is weird.

After reading it, the author's writing is good. Very few people can write well about spell battles. They basically write about love and romance. The only problem the author has is the skill setting. At first glance, it will be uncomfortable. The description is too complicated. As for the skill setting, you have to think about what the readers of fan fiction like. I read all fan fiction, and of course I like "familiar" things. Now, my inner thought is "It would be great if I knew these skills." You can be innovative, but you have to write "familiarity". In spell mode, you directly apply projection magic and add a little explanation, which can improve the sense of reading and make readers understand faster. After reading three battles, I am familiar with the setting and can understand it. The point is, is there any reader who can endure this period of getting familiar with the setting? I did it for the fun of watching knights. I endured it and adapted to the setting. And I am still not interested in the spell mode or the projection magic mode at all. In my opinion, this mode is not used except for disguise. There is no fun and no new ideas. That is to say, the protagonist currently has two to three layers of disguise. Then, if you think about King Frieza and the Saiyans, they are not weak in their normal state. Now that you have been exposed, you cannot write about the mode of the mastermind behind the scenes, but you can write in the direction of transformation. Currently, it feels like the author is also planning in this direction, but the design is not obvious.

I've just read Chapter 14 and it's very well written. The overall level can be regarded as good food, but because the level of the spell-returning novels in Qidian is generally very low, it can be called fairy grass in this field. This is not an invincible novel. The author's design of the protagonist's spell is also creative and relatively consistent with the limitations of the original work. Come on, author.

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Yo ho Has the sun and moon officially begun to melt? The ticket is given to you

You can write it well, don't keep updating it, keep up the good work

Very awesome author, very interesting. Faced with the increasingly collapsing combat power of anime, the world view has been enlarged. Well, if it's the right anime character, it also fits the setting.

The black flash can break through without any lower limit.