
I Am Searching, Fighting and Withdrawing in America
我在美利坚搜打撤
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- Ongoing
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- 426k Words
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- Urban
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- Male
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- Urban Life
- Updated
- 4mo ago
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- Qidian
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Wonderful plot
The description of the fighting scene is very strong, the plot is exciting and imaginative, and it is also very consistent with history and culture. It's not bad. Can you continue writing? A little more
The idea in Chapter 16 is too honest, right?
In order to eat the pork you kill, do you have to raise it yourself? In such an environment, the quality and intelligence of the special forces with pig's feet should be number one, right? With the ability of pig's feet, making money is not a small problem
Thoughts on Chapter 16
Regarding the issues you mentioned about Chapter 16, I can assure you that the author has absolutely no habit of abusing the protagonist. You can also find that except for that point, the other protagonists did not accept the anger at all. The reason why the author wrote that is because this is a big country. Although it cannot compare with our country in terms of order, it is still a superpower. It is very unrealistic for the protagonist to kill and kill people of the motherland as soon as the game starts. Wouldn't it be a brainless fun? The author does not exclude cool articles, but articles like this that somewhat reflect reality can be slightly different from reality, but they cannot be too outrageous. They still have to be somewhat logical (this is what I personally think). Everyone who can read at Qidian is an old bookworm, and I think they will also prefer articles with a bit of logic and brainpower (the author is not saying that his writing is very logical, he just said that he is working hard in that direction). That's why I wrote that episode. The protagonist is just a human with super strength. He will still die if he is hit by a bullet. It is impossible to kill and kill from the beginning. It is normal to be a little angry. Actually, if we are to be realistic, it is not unusual for the protagonist to be beaten up. However, the purpose of writing a book is to make readers happy, so I have already started to revise it, because it is really a lot. If I need to revise it, I estimate that I will have to revise 10,000 words, so I hope everyone can give me some time. Thank you for your support✊✊✊
I thought it was like traveling to the United States and then searching and evacuating. After the evacuation, the next time you come back with a new identity, and then the main character is in a safe country.
The author is considered capable, and those who say it is well written are right. Unfortunately, if we choose the wrong route, no matter how hard we try, it will be in vain. I have read more than thirty free chapters, and my evaluation is that it is useless. Because the plot always goes in a depressing direction, no matter how well written it is, it can't stop the feeling of frustration from accumulating, and eventually I have to give up for the sake of my physical and mental health. Whenever the protagonist has some achievements, he starts to be oppressed or find trouble. Both the underworld and the white people are looking for trouble for the protagonist. The author said that the protagonist should maintain his identity as a white man, but also let the protagonist join the underworld. Even if the gang has a positive outlook on life, he will always deal with the gang and be oppressed by the powerful underworld forces. The protagonist's personal strength is the strongest in the world, and he is fully capable of carrying out assassinations, but he can only endure it. It seemed too depressing to me. Most people look at time traveler themes with plug-ins because they want to see the entertainment properties of the work. I don't want to see the protagonist continue to live such a frustrating life even though he has cheats.
The author has checked a lot of information, and the author has basically finished reading the slices of Lao A. Now he is watching the live broadcast replay, so it will be more in line with reality. If you like it, please give it a vote~
The author's essays are quite good and have a sense of life.
Chapter 21 Something is wrong, something is wrong with handling