America: Equipment Detective

The introduction is good, put it on the bookshelf and take a look😁😁

Come on, overall the writing is good and the rhythm is relatively smooth, but there are still a few cool settings.

When I see LAPD, I think of Rock Lee

The introduction is a bit attractive. Please update more.

I wrote 11 chapters on the first case!

If you have any questions or suggestions, you can send them here~~~~ It's impossible to play alone 🤝

If you want to write a case, don't get these inexplicable equipment, especially the first two equipments are quite outrageous. A new employee lost his police detective badge for no reason? The other pair of glasses is even more outrageous. Use new glasses for used ones. The used glasses are not the same as the brand new ones. You might as well just steal them and then just take the boss to buy the same ones openly. Your attribute settings are even more outrageous. If you don't want to be extraordinary, don't adjust the attributes. Is it interesting to adjust the attributes and give them 0.1? And can you not get involved with the killing line? You set the protagonist's mother as a doctor and his brother as a lawyer. How come he is also the top middle class? Inexplicably, the protagonist is afraid of being killed. What the hell, the protagonist is high? Concentrate on detective work. Let's not mention how the protagonist directly entered the police detective station. You didn't write it anyway, but when it comes to detective work, can you be more professional? The detective plots of the American-style house next door in Rock Lee are more detailed than you. The characters are rich and interesting, and at least the logic must be more normal. The first case started well, but the middle part was ruined. You should at least write the plot of the investigation, and explain who in the team is responsible for logistics and liaison. It was investigated online. The protagonist took a photo like the big boss, and the younger brother automatically found out who the body was. And without even communicating with the missing patrol officer, he automatically got the details of the case. And didn't you consider that this is the area you are responsible for? Normally speaking, such a remote place is not the responsibility of the protagonist's bureau at all. Don't you even write a plot in which the captain takes the initiative to fight for the case? This kind of case where the missing person can be found out and someone jumps out to ask for ransom within 24 hours is not an obvious performance. And a newcomer doesn't even have to write a report? The lead teacher of the protagonist is just as outrageous as his younger brother. The case is finally closed, and the prosecutor is not here. What the hell is a policeman like you doing to reach a plea deal with a suspect? Is this your responsibility? At least it's not something that the protagonist, a first-level police detective, can be responsible for.