My Wardrobe Leads to the Demon King’s Castle

I saw the latest chapter, Good Grass ~ Immortal Grass, Pearl Covered in Dust. A remarkable cyberpunk article. Many people only see the darkness and darkness of cyberpunk, but ignore its absurd side. This book has a bit of that flavor. The choice of words and sentences, the characterization are average to above average, the plot arrangement is a bit haphazard, and there is not enough foreshadowing. The setting is quite innovative. I can't quite summarize what the world view is currently about. Let's just call it a story about a magical warrior/demon king bravely venturing into cyberpunk. To be honest, I was short of books. I came to see how abstract a book with only three monthly votes (I later voted twice) was. I didn't expect it to be a pretty good seedling. Logically speaking, it shouldn't be so low. There should be hundreds of monthly votes at this level... I roughly analyzed it, maybe the problem lies in the title and introduction of the book? Not intuitive enough. My suggestion is to first change the time when the story takes place from 2199 to 2077, and change the title of the book to "2077: My Wardrobe Leads to the Demon King's City" Firstly, the title directly points out the two elements of cyberpunk and western fantasy; secondly, 2077 is a relatively well-known label, and everyone will know it is cyberpunk at a glance. Then change the introduction. Not only is it from the perspective of the heroine, but there is too little content. Based on the original title, I thought it was a story about the protagonist living in modern times whose wardrobe leads to the Demon King's Castle. You can keep the first paragraph unchanged, leave a blank line, and write a more detailed introduction from the perspective of the protagonist. This will be very intuitive for readers. Oh, one more thing, remember to remove the word "killing decisively" in the label. This book is not decisive, and the current label is purely negative, so everyone is avoiding it.

A large section of the flashback describing how Winster punched a child in the room after taking LSD was quite redundant. It neither shaped the character nor affected the subsequent plot. I didn't see the point of describing so much space. To draw attention to the strength of Winster's body, one doesn't need to write such detailed memories. I watched it while jumping. There is also a warm-up race on a motorcycle. What I felt after watching it was that I started to chase and fight again for no reason. It didn't have much effect on the plot. I also watched it while skipping.

The romantic fusion of fantasy and cyber science fiction is so beautiful✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎

I was really delayed by the title of the book. I feel that the core, the general framework of being summoned by the devil to save the demons, and then going to the cyberpunk world to find the power to save the world is not reflected at all The book itself is a fantasy world-saving set, but it does not have the huge pressure that fantasy often has, the feeling of facing the crisis of world destruction at every turn, and then mixed with the cyberpunk world view, it looks not bad Then why is it not on the shelves now?

The title of the book, "Liang Jie Wen", also has a cybernetic theme. If you choose this title, it's just a niche, but you still haven't attracted the target readers.

I also want to see more stories about the Demon King's Castle.

Let me ask, is there no space magic? The 7th level spell doesn't involve space magic yet? Not to mention space confinement and strangulation, there must be space rings, so I spent so much effort to give away a few bags of rice. Okay, you said no, then the cyber science level is so high, and science level rice is available, isn't there nutrition cream and compressed food? Although it didn't taste good, I was almost starving, so I took a few bags of rice back. I don't know if the author has ever been hungry, and even had a few bags of rice taken away from him. Maybe it was for fun, but those were used to save lives. Generally speaking, he would be very angry. Is it understandable that the protagonist does not care about the life and death of the Demon King's City by being so calm? I'm still waiting for the elevator for 5 hours, so I'm not in a hurry. Even children who fight desperately for vomit do not understand what it is like to be hungry. Or am I becoming more and more impetuous and care about everything 😅.

It's very well written, keep it up! Let's hope our future doesn't end up like that! !

I don't want to write books on my own all the time (′へ` )

If you don't like it, just scold it, it doesn't matter, the author will suffer. QAQ