Start with Anatomy Weird Stories

As in the title Can't you just say she is the heroine? You still go around and around 🥱

First of all, although what I want to write about is what I don't like about the book, I have no intention of asking the author to make changes. I have always resented readers trying to influence the author's writing on their own. The relationship between readers and authors should be like when you go to a restaurant to eat. If you like it, you eat it. If you don't like it, you leave. It's not like Party A and Party B. When you don't like it, you want the other party to change the plan, so I decided to give up before writing it. Personally, I don't like the characters in books that have too strong abilities, such as various conceptual abilities, especially conceptual abilities involving time. Once it is too strong, the plot will be difficult to control and it will be easy to go berserk. Before the plot of taking in a girlfriend appeared, it could be said to be quite amazing. In my eyes, the core attraction is the character of the male protagonist and the rigorous criminal investigation and medical plot. Then the next step is that after the character's personality is determined, no matter how much you write, you can't support the word count. There is no need for the girlfriend to control the entire city's criminal investigation plot. The male protagonist's inhuman characteristics are getting stronger and stronger, and the medical plot is also weakening, so the new plot becomes a battle of wits and a competition with extraordinary abilities, which happens to be a part that I don't like very much. I strongly suspect that arranging such a powerful girlfriend is to omit the subsequent criminal investigation obstacles faced by covert murder in a high-tech world. This will pave the way for the fight to start later.

There are not many chapters at the moment, but the quality is really high. It was very enjoyable to watch, especially the part where Shen Xing took a DV to take a picture of the doll, and the human figure outlined in noise pointed to the direction of Shen Xing. I felt chills running down my spine for a moment.

A new work with the theme of ghost stories similar to "What's It Like to Become a Vampire". The protagonist is a mentally ill person with high IQ but lack of empathy and fear. He is keen on studying the supernatural and dares to study ghost stories to promote his own evolution. The writing is solid and it feels very good to explore the supernatural step by step.

Personally, I think it has a strong sense of immersion, with delicate descriptions and a good sense of rhythm. Keep up the good work, the only book I can read these days.

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Although, I still want to say, get away from the classics and sacrifice, copy the classics to get luck 🙂

Get away from the beast. Is it a new book? It's too new. There are less than 50 chapters 🙂. I will definitely give Goun a development bonus 😡

Really, you said you were exhausted from writing, but you really can't continue writing. Just send a notice and people who support you will naturally read your new books in the future. As a result, you are directly eunuch. You also said before that your books on other platforms are very profitable. I really can't imagine how the author of Direct Eunuch makes money. Really no character at all.

After reading Chapter 49, I have a relatively clear understanding of the book. I feel that the author cannot continue writing like this. There are two serious problems with this book: Firstly, 1. As the protagonist's anomaly, there is no commonality. It should be a special attack talent for dealing with strange things, but the author used it all to write debuffs for family affection; Secondly, 2. The weird anatomy plot that is the title of the book should be the climax of the plot, but it is written like a serious medical work! For the first point, take Feng Bujue as an example. His lack of fear is used to deal with fear copies. It is the core talent of the protagonist in the book! As for getting along with relatives and friends, the impact of this talent is a challenge, an abyss challenge, and the goal of the protagonist's efforts. Adding the two together, Feng Bujue's personality flaw of not having fear has completely become a plus point for the entire book! And what about Shen Xing, the protagonist of this book? "Incommensurable" actually used all of it to describe the harm to family relationships, but not a single thing about the weird effects! I'm just confused, why did the author write about this talent? Can this talent make the performance of this book worse? Then came the weird anatomy. Take Chen Dachui as an example. His horror houses are all about weird adventures. Adjusting the rhythm of the plot and describing our weird life are small fun climaxes, which are bonus points! And what about in this book? This anatomy is written in the same way as serious medical work, simple and plain - this is a strange article! Can the virtue and honor of orthodox medicine in treating illnesses and saving lives match the weird stories? Shouldn't this focus on describing the twists and turns of various weird scenes during anatomy, and then let the male protagonist's incomparable talents come online to highlight the advantages of the protagonist's talents? No. The writing in the article is so smooth, there is no weird feeling at all, at least it is half good for you - is this a bonus? This is a clear deduction! In short, the author's idea of ​​solving the problem is wrong!

I had half painted Wu Xiaoting before, but now I don't need to continue painting (tears

I'm curious whose vest can actually make a girl sacrifice!

The more specific performance updates there are, the higher the probability of producing special items [monthly tickets]. If updates are interrupted, there is a risk of collective loss of control!

As soon as I saw what he wrote about world reset, I knew that his previous writing collapsed and could not be continued. Writing about a psychology expert is also a failure. I didn't see how much psychological skills this expert used. Later, he was directly affected and went crazy. There is no sign of using psychology. The author is unwilling to research the information carefully and write.

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😐 As soon as the writing collapses, the eunuch is cast. What the heck? If there is a problem with the plot, it can be changed. If there is a disagreement, the eunuch is cast. There is not even a notice.

Cut? 😳, It's a pity, it looked pretty good at the beginning, but I stopped watching it after the main character faked his death and ignored Hajimei. At that time, I felt like I was going to collapse and I almost ran away. Fortunately, I ran away early😈

What can I say, it was wrong to start with the suspended animation, and the heroine was not dead. It would have been better for her to have died directly and let the protagonist grab the Insect King. What a pity. The first two chapters of this book are really beautiful, and the sister is also very cute.

When I was pretending to be dead, I was thinking about how to deal with my sister's line. I thought about raising her for a few days, but in the end I became a eunuch 😅

The writing style is really good, but the characters in the story are quite annoying. Each character is a little abnormal. One or two of them are fine, but if there are too many such characters, there will be an indescribable sense of depression in the reading experience. How to describe it, it's like you are in a ward full of cold patients, with more than a dozen people surrounding you moaning intermittently, coughing one after another, and breathing heavily.

It feels like the outline has been changed. All the foreshadowing was that the protagonist should join the national team and take the opportunity to develop. This line was suddenly broken. Is it because he was afraid of being banned? Wang Xinran should have been written to death. I can feel that the emotions have been laid out, but in order to cut off the previous line, I can only open a new line from here, and then the emotion changes suddenly, and the logic is not connected. The author can only write that Wang Xinran has no emotions. If it is the Wang Xinran before, he has gone crazy now, and then the shaping of Wen Yan later. The early one is obviously shaped by a mid-term villain, but he is offline early. Who is the villain in the back? Country? This creates a very embarrassing situation. There is no villain, no one can cause trouble for the protagonist, and there is no point in writing this book. Of course, the country can continue to investigate the protagonist, and the protagonist is the villain. This way of shaping is okay, but it is easy to be blocked. The author should have written the plot of revenge for Li Xiaohua in order to avoid this in the early stage. In general, the foreshadowing and character plots were shelved for some reason. If obstructionists like Wen Yan appear again later in the plot, they will completely fall into the trap, so there is a high probability that they will open a dungeon later (don't underestimate that opening a dungeon can solve most incoherent plot problems), or completely switch to supernatural or science fiction. Now the main plot cannot be advanced, and can only write about hiding identities and resurrection experiments. To be honest, I feel that the author does not know what to write later.

Are you worth the subscription points I spent?

It's rare to see such an excellent work on the list. Of course, this formulaic beginning is unoriginal and looks like a pornographic film, but the origin is understandable, and the list is all 💩. Yes, I did not use most of them, but this purely subjective and biased vocabulary definition. I remember that I first saw "The Corpse Man" or other works on the list, and I thought it was a good work, until it gradually evolved into fighting monsters and upgrading, and I gave up without seeing the author's sincerity. I wonder if most authors have to consider monetizing the number of words, so they become more and more useless. I am very worried that this work will follow the same routine. I know that such speculation and worry are unreasonable, but these are all thinking patterns that have been in the pit for a long time. Let's talk about the work itself. First of all, the background description of the protagonist is excellent. It does not cram the reader into the book at the beginning, nor does it use universal values ​​​​to define the protagonist. Instead, it tells us about an "abnormal" human being. This definition of normal is only universal, and universality is just a means of politicians to maintain stability. The various psychological activities and character dialogues in the following article are all in line with basic human cognition and logic. It seems very simple, but in fact it is not easy to achieve this. For example: Whether there is an accident or a fight in a movie, TV show or book, there will always be someone holding the injured or losing party at the first moment and asking: What happened to you? Are you okay? As a viewer or reader, have you ever thought about it, if your family was involved in a traffic accident and you were the one who was slightly injured or intact, would you hold your loved one in your arms and ask him or her what happened and if he or she was okay? Another example: In movies, TV shows or books, there are always scenes of shouting in fights or dialogues during fitness exercises. However, humans do not make sounds during strenuous exercise. It's not that they can't, it's that they won't do it. The above two scenes can be seen everywhere in literary and artistic works, but many people do not realize that they violate basic human cognition and logical activities. As a literary and artistic work, the settings can be wild and outrageous, but the logic of the writing must be rigorous and consistent with human cognitive common sense and psychological activities. This is why I like this book and recommend it...

As of March 2nd, Chapter 94 can be said to be a rare and exquisite book. The writing is exquisite, the connection between the plots is very smooth, and the description of the characters' emotions is relatively rich. It has been a long time since I read a book in such an immersive way. The language description and psychological game of the protagonist and supporting characters are also very exciting, and the setting is also very interesting.

I was planning to keep it for a while, but I didn't expect it to die 😂 But I expected to have excellent results, but it's a pity

It's not too much to update ten chapters, right? 😁 As long as the update is released, I will give you a monthly ticket, which is very satisfying~

I got addicted to reading it one night and stayed up all night until I read the latest chapter. As a result, I have updated two chapters since I finished reading it. In fact, I also felt that restarting the whole book from the world was not right, and it was no longer possible.

As the title says, I wish the author reincarnation in the Hall of Life and Death

Please improve me. Is there any group?

Oh, what if there is a sudden update tomorrow?