I Have to Play You Hard

This background setting is like a fool. Why does the recommendation system have civilians? Everyone is the second uncle and the third uncle. Then the protagonist chooses the protagonist, an outsider? We all know that the protagonist has good grades. It's funny to have to wait for the exam soon before preparing to kill the protagonist. Just kill all the civilians and at most lose some money. The whole book has an aesthetic feeling of missing a brainstem.

You can't write it like this. You have no foreshadowing, you are the first one. With a large number of adjectives, it can only be called the number of words. There is a foreshadowing, you do it again. That can be called a climax