Xuanjian: Use the Tide to Respond to the Tide

I can only say that the writing is very illogical and the writing style is very similar to Xuanjian, which is worthy of praise. But if you look closely, you can't stand it. When you see a Zifu coming to Li's house and taking the protagonist away by force, you can't stand it. Li Zhouwei ascended the throne of Mingyang and did not come to the lake for thirty years. There are only two possibilities: he was surrounded and killed by many Jindan, or he was killed by the Luoxia Mountain Taoist who continued to suppress the fruit flavor. If the Li family had not been exterminated, then Li Jiangchun, the No. 2 Gold-seeking seed, would have taken over the gold-seeking baton. It is useless to cooperate with the forces that the Li family has made friends with. An ordinary person with two magical powers, Zifu, shows off his head and goes to Wangyue Lake to get someone. This is still the case when the great real person Li Quewan is still there, or when he is about to ascend to the throne of Quan Dan Yu, and when there are a lot of Zhixuan in the Song Dynasty who have nothing to eat.

The author's writing style has a strong 🐔 flavor, which is among the best among fics. Even the if lines inserted into the main text don't feel like the author has changed. The only drawback is that the problem of dragging articles has also been inherited. 🐔There is foreshadowing before the fairy pulls the text, so there is the peak of hatred. Reciting poetry and chanting is too frequent, and it feels weird to add poetry to skills.

If you are caught in the quagmire and dare to write from a future perspective, just raise it to a higher level first. In addition, the writing and Taoism are quite good, and the future is promising.

I read it on Tieba and actually published it as a book. I saw the protagonist being taken away and didn't read it because I felt something was weird and I couldn't place it.

The writing is very good. After 🐔 is finished and the overall settings are sorted out, I can write some articles. The situation of adults can only be seen clearly from top to bottom.

The author should re-open a new book! ! Think about it?

You can write that a master of the three mysteries and some great masters from the mysteries went to the outer world and created another world, and what happened after a few years. In this way, some constraints of the original text can be thrown away. Feel free to express yourself and conceive a magnificent ancient poem.

No wonder Jiang Chun doesn't appear in the author's book. It turns out that Chu Yi Tianli Zheng Shaoyin was hidden by 🐢🙂

Great Some places are back, come on, come on

It's true that the writing is good, but some settings feel wrong even if they don't refer to the original work. If nothing else, Qingyuan couldn't ask for a favor from the Zifu, so he gave the protagonist a big one, and then the big one gave him such a huge opportunity. He has to be called a fellow Taoist in the future, uh, the golden nature in the cave is just a legacy of failed pursuit of gold, right? So awesome? Which of the golden elixirs in the original book doesn't have a few other golden elixirs in its hand? I've never seen anyone engage in such a big battle.

Those who have chased me from the quagmire will pray for more in every chapter. Congratulations to my brother for taking this step 👏

You have almost 200,000 words. If you don't sign the contract at this point, there is basically no hope. However, it seems that you have a job as the author and don't rely much on the salary as a writer. It is purely a hobby. After all, if you want to make money by taking this exam, if you don't sign a contract for 200,000 words, it will be discontinued immediately. I feel that not many people read it, and it should be a blow to me that no one reads my work. Why not go to Xuanjian's post bar to share the book I wrote?

If you can write 500,000 yuan to not be imprisoned, the more diseases you will get, you should encourage me

Support for the future

The disadvantage is that the writing is so enjoyable 🙂 I don't know how to turn Taiyin

Which book is Zhuye's Xuanjian fan? What's your name? The starting point was not found.