Immortal Official!

The social structure you write about, the author, is too obvious 😅 without any metaphors.

First of all, the setting is still the power system of Qi Refining Xianxia, ​​but with a different name, combined with some background foreshadowing so far, it can be regarded as the traditional type of immortals, demons, demons and Buddhas. Some of the settings related to practice are a little bit like "all the lower cultivators have qualifications", and also a little bit like "the clan and the sect rule the world together". The early plot setting and the beginning of Li Dai Tao Jiang can be regarded as one of the classics, and there are no particularly dramatic mistakes. Getting started is still a part-time job in a "blacksmith shop". To be honest, my first reaction felt that it was a bit similar to the plot of Bateman's Demon Cultivation. The writing style and detailed description are okay. I personally feel that part of it is a bit like the copywriting of some AI videos. However, nowadays they are basically used for polishing or ghostwriting. If everyone uses it, it means that everyone has no use for it, so it doesn't matter. Although the characterization is a bit too templated, the arrangement is relatively harmonious and does not look too abrupt. In general, food and grass. Purely personal, no confrontation

Where is the cause and effect? ​​It is clearly the intelligence system.

I have a question. The Yan family in Shangyang has been practicing qi for hundreds of years. When a young man goes to pay homage to the Taoist tradition, he should be allowed to go alone. Is there no elder to take care of him? Or are you saying that there has never been a robbery incident before and it is very safe, so you can rest assured?

Quite interesting. The pace is quite slow. The wording also compares which one. But compared to the book on my bookshelf (Xianye), it's quite inferior. This feels like I just want to push in any direction. The pace seems quite slow. But the writing is a bit sloppy and casual. Many events happen naturally. It started out of nowhere. At the moment I think it's pretty average. Check out the spare food. It really depends on the diction and characterization and plot, but it's really not as good as Xianye.

Even though it's a new account, it's not like a newcomer, which old man is reincarnated?

No matter how much writing you write, you can basically cut one piece a day and forget about it. Writing is the same as not writing.

What is the use of this plug-in😥

Write it more plainly. I feel a little tired from reading it.

This book is so rich that it can be slaughtered. The writing style is in the same vein as this book. It is so similar. When I first read it, I thought Lao Bai was playing a trumpet. If you don't believe me, you can go and see if what I said is right.

Immortal Official and Official Immortal are both classics, this Immortal Official! How is it?

So many recommendations, so few comments?

Look at the comments like "Shangyuque"🤔

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