Tokyo Writer: Since the Late 1980S

I have read so many literary works, not only those whose background is in Liben, but also those in Europe and China. Apart from the book "I am Not a Literary Man", the one that impressed me the most is this one. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The biggest problem with this article is that it does not make the protagonist look like a human being, but like a robot. Everything has an extremely broad range of knowledge and an amazing memory. Although my predecessor is the Department of Literature of Tokyo University, I am not a liberal arts student, so I dare not judge myself. But as a reader, I naturally have an evaluation of the protagonist's character. Everything is well thought out, and he does not change his expression when being besieged by the underworld. The writing is obviously too idealistic and not like a human being. The other shortcomings are not too big. The first hundred pictures are a bit heavy on the AI ​​flavor. However, many new books on the Internet today have this problem, so I will not comment on it. For me, the advantage of having a heavy AI flavor is that it makes the article more like traditional serious literature. Although the description is simple and unpretentious, it is more touching than the flowing lines of online articles. However, some light novels or cool novels are so heavy on AI that people really don't even have the desire to read them. Let's talk about the advantages. What made me feel most refreshed was a lot, and as someone who read it all in one go, even though I could guess the refreshments everywhere, I still had the urge to read on. I think this is the most important point of a book. Internet articles generally have three golden chapters, but I think the first three chapters can be read. After it is put on the shelf, there are many articles that are obviously produced on an assembly line. ps: I was just called over by my colleague to show off my writing. I forgot all the ideas in my mind😭😭😭 Let's do this for now

Sure enough, writing this kind of novel cannot escape the literary youth

Literary youth, ability is not worthy of cognition, as if you are a native of small-time life fused with the memory of a time traveler, coupled with various psychological descriptions of words, you are invincible

I can't stand it any longer. I can't stand it until Chapter 2. It doesn't matter that the original person before time travel had a youth problem. He was a student at a prestigious private university after all. You, a time-traveler, have taken over someone else's body, and you look like you are filled with resentment and resentment. Who are you showing this to? Na Wen Qingbing's anger was so strong that it almost overflowed. In the end, the way to get ahead was not to rely on copying? Then what are you pretending to be?

Does the protagonist of this book also suffer from literary youth syndrome? I didn't read it, I just wanted to complain about why the protagonist, a copywriter, could copy out Wenqingbing. It's super strange. 🙂🙂🙂

First of all, I paid to watch it. The more I watched it, the more something seemed wrong. A time traveler who got along by copying books really thought they were his own? Brother, it's okay to lie to others. Don't lie to yourself. You really think those things are yours.

Those who plagiarized are starting to become illiterate.

The identity before rebirth is not worthy of the protagonist's ability in the book

This book feels like an ancient urban novel in the guise of a Tokyo writer. There are not as many chapters in which the protagonist is bragging about his brilliance as he is fighting the villain. This is the style of ancient urban novels. I wish that after becoming famous, the whole world would target the protagonist and slap him in the face. The next one will come soon. Nowadays, this kind of violent novel is not very popular, and readers come here to enjoy it.

Let me just say one thing: in Japan, politicians, conglomerates and writers regard the entertainment industry as their own.

The vest story... It's only chapter 13 and I'm opening the second vest...

Kind? Don't want to lie to the Japanese? Pity the Japanese? !

To sum up, the protagonist is a plagiarist who is illiterate. You can be intellectual and you can plagiarize, but you are only ill and you only copy books. The author has not considered the positioning of the protagonist at all.

The literary flavor is too strong, making it very uncomfortable to read.

How can a civil servant's psychological activities be so brilliant and upright? . . . Why don't you write about this and that for society? . . . Just go overboard and pretend to be slapped in the face to climax. . . Write random nonsense. .

Since the protagonist is a graduate of a prestigious university, finding a job shouldn't be as difficult as the author makes it, right? You've written about the bubble economy, but the problem is that it hasn't burst yet. Isn't it difficult for the protagonist to find a job with a higher salary than the one the author wrote about? At first glance, I want to write something more realistic, but it conflicts with the plot I want to write and looks very disconnected. If you don't have the ability, don't write like this.

The author, Nakamori Akina's mother was very good to her, it was her father and siblings who sucked the blood! After Akina's mother died, Akina cut off all contact with her family!

A plagiarist, where does the literary youth disease come from🤔

After reading the first chapter, I felt a twisted sense of literary youth. It was awkward, and the protagonist felt like he had no ability but had to pretend to compete.

The author, Wen Qing, is seriously ill. I never praise suffering.

This book is polished with AI from the first chapter, and it becomes more obvious as you go to the back. Alas, I couldn't even survive the free chapter and died of poisoning.

After reading dozens of chapters, it smells like an al machine.

Stop reading after reading two chapters, Tokyo Jiahao

When I first started reading it, I had a very strange feeling. I obviously felt that the writing was good and the writing style was compact, but it just gave me an inhuman feeling, not quite like it was written by a real person...

It's not... It's just... This kind of sentence structure is easy to understand at first glance, and it's very flavorful and needs no further explanation.

The author uses a text written in the pure AI style of a literary youth from the old era.

Better and slower, eunuch rhythm

Just don't mess up and maintain your standards. I'll give you all my votes.

Conan-style, timeline, 21~23 years old after graduating from college, suddenly turned into 27 years old, occasionally 1990, 1991, a bunch of messy timeline mistakes, and the protagonist helped compose the music (don't admit defeat), but I never filled it in after seeing it. At first, I said it would be Sakai Izumi's debut, but later it became loneliness

Finish it as soon as possible, what's the water like? I saw earlier that you said I would continue to subscribe until the end, but now that there is no sign of the end, I have also subscribed.