Peninsula: Love Starts Tomorrow

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I feel that the biggest problem is that there are too many female protagonists. Instead of casting a wide net, it is not a key breakthrough. Mina, Sana, Momo, and Tzuyu are the most popular and best-written characters. Bae Joo-hyun feels like she's a bit of a drama every time she appears. Ryu Jimin's quarrelsome feast should be quite effective. If you force it, it will be too long to finish it later.

Is this because after watching the romance series, I couldn't help but write it myself?

Suzy

The comments were deleted again. Although the ones deleted were the author's own, the ones I replied to were also gone.                                                                           How to solve the plot of A later? Your answer is that there must be a Shura field. So in the previous plot, what is the purpose of bringing the nine TWICE people from different practice groups, different practice rooms, and even different dormitories together? Isn't it to cultivate the group soul earlier? From the first chapter, you write that you can feel them, they are crying and laughing. When we first met Tzuyu, she also said that she will transform in the future. What this reveals, at least I understand, is that the male lead in JYP will make TWICE better in the future.                                                        ，？ Not to mention that girls still have tendencies between each other. For example, Jeongyeon supports Nayeon, Dahyun supports Tzuyu, and MISAMO is completely torn apart. When TWICE debuts, how will they let them go?                                                                                 TWICE，，？ Don't tell me just because you like it or are reluctant to give up. At least so far, the bond between the male protagonist and the girls is not enough, and the bond between the girls themselves is not enough.                 ，，， If the male protagonist wakes up the memory of his past life and feels the various situations of TWICE, and his behavior in coming to JYP is to cause a Shura field and destroy their group soul, then the male protagonist is not a scumbag, that is called an inappropriate person.                                         TWICE，，，，，，，TWICE，？ Or are you just going to write a character that is ruined like this? The inability to refuse, warmth, and kindness shown previously are all disguises. Even if the memory is awakened, there is no filter, and it is still selfish to go its own way?

Got7 debut? It's hard to top it🤣, this group feels like it's a hit or miss, it's not as good as the summit group, but it's better than other groups at the bottom. Solo feels better.

Let's add a bookshelf first. I read a lot of Rabbit's Gambit and tricked me into it. Then I wrote about Kim Taeyeon and Lin Yoona. I can accept Rabbit when I'm around 30, but I can't really relate to SNSD who is on the run 😰

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What do you mean, it's free as soon as you place an order? You're just out of luck.

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It seems that I have seen this subject before

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I can accept the heroine of this book. It's a romance series. I've never read it because the heroine can't accept it. Some of them are really too old. For now, maybe those in their 28s and 30s would like to read it. When I read a book, I read the heroine first. Come on, it's rare to see a satisfying novel written by a heroine.

Thank you for your hard work

Is it really possible to write so many heroines 😂

I deleted one of my comments and found out that it was complaining about male leader Tzuyu's singing skills. I checked again and found that the content of the article had been modified. I listened to my advice and it's good. About I think the praise for MINA in the previous chapter about the song "Hanabi" is too exaggerated. By the time I was sixteen, MINA had only been in JYPE for a year. If her singing skills could still be that good, what kind of talent would it take?                            SANA，？ What will the other members of TWICE do next? Just rely on Dahyun to mediate? Is it possible? I hope there is a method that fits the tone of this book. You must know that since their sixth teen years, TWICE has only become busier and busier. Frequent trips and comebacks have basically completely eliminated their personal lives. Moreover, they still live together. How can they hide it? People who live together ~                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             But there are still old problems, how to rationalize the relationship line, arrange the time to get along, and the issue of placement. These female idols after their debut have their own schedules. TWICE can be said to be close to the water, but for others, it is hard to say, and the male lead's own career line and time. This is a test of how the author arranges the roles of the girls. Don't make the male lead only revolve around a few girls in addition to his own career. That is too cheap~

The male protagonist debuted in JYP's GOT7 and is basically invisible except for activities during the comeback period. This leaves enough time for TWICE's Jiutu to get along with each other. But if Zhao Miyeon is also listed as the female protagonist, she will have to wait until she quits YG to be with Yu Qi before she can spend more time together. Then how should she accept other people around the male protagonist? By cheating? The bond within the green card line is actually very deep. In other words, Jiutu is tied together by the male protagonist, and the relationship between them is good enough. In addition, since they have not debuted, they can spend more time with the male protagonist. Point, after debuting, there won't be many opportunities to meet alone. Therefore, the problem now is how to make them accept each other reasonably. They can't just compromise because the male lead is good or important enough to them. Isn't that too perfunctory and immoral? After all, TWICE's Nine Rabbits have different personalities, and their personal choices are naturally different, not to mention different nationalities, different family backgrounds, and cultural and conceptual differences. They cannot be generalized. Since it is not a bulldozing story, but a story about a sweet pet, there must be enough reasons and foreshadowing. I hope the author can consider it carefully ~

Because I wrote it in the order of the characters in the story at the beginning, so the current heroines are Zhou Ziyu, Lin Nayeon, Zhao Miyeon, Kim Jisoo, sana, momo, mina, Bae Suzy, Bae Zhuhyun, and the rest are the supporting women for the time being, Park Chaeyoung, Sulli, IU, Kim Jiwon, Park Chorong, Kim Taeyeon, Kang Hye-won, Ryu Ji-min, Jang Won-young, Shin Yoo-na, Hwang Ye-ji, the difference between the supporting actress and the heroine is that the heroine is the main writer, and the story cannot go around these. The supporting actress is definitely related to the protagonist, but depending on the progress of the story, all the characters will have stories with the protagonist. Finally, please collect and read it.

Protagonist song single: "way back home" "if you", "some ambiguity", "I need you" The regular group album contains the songs "Love Scenarion", "Don't Flirt", "Fool", "Summer On You" Created and written "Don't Forget Me", "Monsters", "Reset"... I will recommend you any good songs. I will inevitably forget some sometimes.

To be honest, the progress is a bit slow, not explosive, and quite mediocre.

Ryu Jimin's father is an anti-China and pro-Japanese leader in South Korea.

Can anyone tell me how long it took for my debut? I read the paid chapters, why is this and that's birthday every day?

I have been raising it, how is the relationship line? I have already closed it in Ambiguity 🙂

I think differently from them. I just think the timeline is not very good. There are more than 300 chapters, and it seems that most of them were underage when the draft was written. In Korea, the legal adult age is 19 years old, and in China, it is 18 years old. , We definitely watch Korean entertainment for food. To me, the emotional period in the early stage is just like farting, there is no difference, because the emotional drama of Korean entertainment should be between 80 and 90 chapters, and I start to eat after more than 110 chapters, but when it reaches more than 200 chapters, I am quite happy to watch him, but I am a little impatient later (personally)

Im Nayeon Yoo Jung-yeon Momo Hirai Sasha Minatozaki Sana Park Jihyo Nai Minami min a Kim Da Hyun Son Chae Young Zhou Tzuyu In order of age from oldest to youngest TWICE looking for roles

The author didn't do a good job segmenting the dialogue at the beginning, and it was very uncomfortable to read the first hundred or so chapters.

The timeline is at the end of 2015. Twice has just debuted for two months, and Fenmo hasn't debuted yet.

You can maintain it later, don't force it, it feels better than an asteroid