The Tribulation-Defying Magical Girl

Give up your identity as a magical girl. The world returns to peace Don't give up your identity as a magical girl. Any little monster can destroy the world. Then tell me what are you going to insist on? You can't use your identity as a magical girl to save a world where you can't be beaten by anyone and can crush you to death, right?

Let's talk about my current impressions. I can't stand it until chapter 10 of the book. First of all, although the emotional tension in the first part is not enough or a little dull, the following chapters 78 and 910 are okay. I recommend reading it in succession. You can see that Tianyin's image is much more three-dimensional. Even though she is scared but thinks that the protagonist needs help, she still gets involved and is willing to help the protagonist share the consequences. In this aspect, she looks like a magical girl. There is no problem with the change of the protagonist. After all, she needs to grow up. I think there is no problem with the above. Then what I want to say is that there is no problem, but what I want to say personally is the determined plot of the protagonist in Chapter 78. To be honest, qb's statement changed the concept but to be honest, I don't think it is a big problem. Why should the protagonist risk the fate of the entire city just because he wants to be a hero? The protagonist is not qualified to do this, so when the protagonist is discouraged, Tianyin comes out. In order to protect the protagonist's dream, she chooses to support and Bearing possible sins together, Tianyin's idea is understandable. She is a kind person, or the protagonist of a standard magical girl animation. She will definitely like it in the anime and even in the book. But it is a matter of perception. Maybe I am sensitive, but I feel that there is something wrong or too ideal here. The situation of the protagonist here is different from many situations. First, the protagonist has experienced disasters, and then the current fatal disaster is as long as It is known that the protagonist can definitely avoid it if he does not become a magical girl. However, the protagonist currently has no clue to solve it. In most other cases, the matter is over. The disaster will come. After being persuaded, mustering up confidence, and solving the problem, you will find that the protagonist here is very different. The protagonist has choices. What he said is one-sided or extreme, and Tianyin is not qualified to do so. Neither of them can bear the weight of life, even if Tiany comforts the protagonist to bear it together. The same thing, and the most important thing is, why are you so anxious, there is no disaster in front of the protagonist group, why are you so anxious to become a magical girl? Do you have to become a magical girl before you can become a hero? Do you have to become a magical girl in this unprepared situation and try your best to save? There is little hope for this kind of disaster. Although it is not your own fault, it is caused by yourself? Why can't we act together with Tianyin first and look for more possibilities to solve the disaster before transforming? Even if we go back in time, the protagonist said that the next time will be difficult, so we just compressed everyone's life into 7 days. Even if Tianyin was going to die, it would be better to transform to rescue and face the disaster. To be honest, the two of them were irresponsible to everyone in the city. Even if the readers know that the disaster will eventually be solved, the protagonist group does not know it. Therefore, although these chapters are indeed more vivid and remind people of anime, they are even more headaches because they are novels. Because there are no pictures, the text expression will be more profound. If this kind of plot appears in anime, there will not be much attention. I am interested in this kind of thing, but the novel may have a little more. I personally feel that it was not handled well, or it was handled well. It showed the youthfulness of the protagonist, but it was also difficult to hold back. I can only say that the protagonist still needs to grow up. I can probably think of going back again, and it should not be so gentle. It may be that Tianyin died tragically in front of him. To be honest, overall there is no big problem. Although it is true that the first few chapters are a bit bland, the subsequent dialogue is okay. And even if I talk about so much of the plot, there is no problem to be honest. Come on, author.

It's so bland, why? Magical girls are originally in the realm of the two-dimensional world. It feels like today's plain water dramas with no merits. The popularity is an absolute dead end. Industrial alternative world toilet paper is popular nowadays because the audience can give up thinking and feel happy. Even if there is nothing, if they have enough positive emotions, they can still give it a passing grade. Logically speaking, this kind of death retrospective story has its own emotional tension. Why didn't I have any emotional waves when I read it? After all, I am just a reader. It might be better to write more descriptions of the characters' emotions and thoughts?

I am not targeting or criticizing the author. The logic of Chapter 10 feels a bit strange. I always feel that I am comparing giving up my power to save a city with giving up my life to save a city of people. If I give up my life to save a city of people, few people can do it, but the price of giving up my power feels a bit light. I feel that the previous article did not reflect the serious consequences of giving up my power. Or maybe it is just that I personally cannot bring it in. I feel that if I choose, I will choose to give up my power after watching it 🤔

As expected, it has been discontinued. In fact, when I first saw the title and introduction of your book, I felt that it would be this way sooner or later. The title of your book is too strange. If it hadn't been for your last book, I would never have clicked on it. Then the previous chapters are really poorly written and can't be read. As for the theme of magical girls, the traffic itself is not good. But I recently read a new book: My Magical Girl Became a Magical Cultivator. You can refer to this book. I personally think that the simple world of magical girls can no longer be written about. Either destroy the gods, or nest it with other worldviews. After writing so much, I still hope you will seriously consider the subject of your next book. You don't have to be obsessed with the four words magical girl.

I'll go, author, don't be discouraged, I don't keep books anymore, read it now 😭 By the way, will the customized physical monthly ticket give $ to the novel author? I got one some time ago, and it's been almost a month now and it still hasn't shipped. . .

Magical Girl Sky Fania?

I thought it was a side story, but it turned out to be an advertisement for a new book haha But the heroine is codenamed Tianyin and has blue hair. Not only is her surname Lin, but her name also has a white O. O. Is this a tribute to the off-duty demon? These chapters do look like what the guy above said. They feel a bit bland and have no ups and downs. Don't be full of "dry stuff" like the previous book. Www. Appropriate daily life is very important in shaping the character image Looking at the advertisement for this book, will one of Noah and Ling Bo stand opposite the protagonist? (Or are both "villains"?) In addition, in this book, it seems that it is very common for men to transform into magical girls. Isn't it set that only a girl in soul can become a magical girl? Or is it that the Civil Defense Bureau's technology to catalyze magical girls is more comprehensive? By the way, here's a reminder about the Future Demon episode