Wandering the Heavens, I’m Going to Become an Immortal

That puppet show thing, clearly only a few people have seen it, so how come it seems like everyone on Qidian knows about it?

Everything else is alright, but the main character gives off a feeling that he lacks nothing except morality. The romance storyline wasn't very well written. Breaking up couples was fine, but it was done too abruptly. If you want to steal Huang Rong's heart, you should meet her before Guo Jing does, and then the two of you can wreak havoc on the Yellow River Gang together.

Huang Rong accepted Guo Jing as her husband, but you didn't? I think Guo Jing is quite a catch.

The protagonist is hypocritical and meddlesome. Whether he's a sycophant of the original work is still unknown; previously, Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) would dedicate three golden chapters to him, but now it's three chapters of garbage. Sorry, the author didn't mean to target you, it's just that Qidian's current state is unbearable.

Stop explaining the differences between the versions and just write about the plot. People who haven't even watched the TV series version don't care about the differences between the three versions of the novel.

The power levels in the ancient martial arts world can be progressively increased according to the four levels of Jin Yong, Gu Long, Wen Ruian, and Huang Yi. This way, you can write a longer story. You always attract readers with martial arts stories, but when you switch to fantasy and xianxia stories, the story starts to fall apart and ends abruptly. Maybe you should write more martial arts worlds.

The author just needs to capitalize on trending topics; whatever's hot, that's what they write about. Hurry up and write down all those Manchu-Han conspiracy theories, Ming-Qing conspiracy theories, and the little things about the US and Japan. People read books to vent their anger, who cares if they're true or false.

I told you long ago that writing about women with exposed breasts is a dead end. You should have cut that out and focused on writing about courtyard houses instead.

Is writing a courtyard house really that profitable? I actually think it's much worse than these two novels, *The Heavens*. This book lacks a bit of inspiration, but it still has that witty banter and borrowed plot elements. The frequent hiatuses or repeated chapters in the latter half of each update are really discouraging for those following the story.

I've noticed a misconception: many people say that the Nine Yin Manual was too yin-like, which led to the creation of the Nine Yang Manual by the Drunken Monk. Huang Chang was a civil official who was commissioned to compile the Longevity Daoist Canon. He gleaned insights from numerous Daoist classics; how could he possibly have an imbalance of yin and yang?