Cultivation of Destiny and Immortality from Elixir Making

When he was a "dog" for the Su family who made alchemy, he knew how to show his strength to win "respect", but he didn't know anything about the family members. Various actions, such as preventing the murder of his father's enemy, gave people the impression that a good person would not want to be a dog, just like a bereaved dog. This golden finger is useless in this plot.

This book won't be a hit. This is the first time I've heard about the urge to get married in the world of immortality.

Eunuch male protagonist, if you mind, don't watch. Don't eat the meat that comes to your mouth. The text has the meaning of giving away a girl. The fiancée introduced by the family refused and accepted him as his apprentice instead (Isn't this just giving away a daughter) PS also used a lot of pen and ink to describe these two girls.

Many plots are really too speechless, and I have no desire to complain at all.

The protagonist's character is a bit weak and he doesn't have any strong opinions yet, so it will be a reference for future readers.

It's too poisonous. When you meet a woman, she has a special physique.

I want to tell the author why I can't stand it. Writing! Wordy, ink stains. Long ink marks are a matter of writing style. Things that don't matter are said back and forth. One idea, say it directly, say it in reverse, and say it in a twisted way. If the meaning is clear, no ink is needed. If you want water, it is not like this. Let me tell you, how is Mr. Chendong so stupid? Description. The description is meticulous, which is a kind of water method. Teach you one trick, no more. I still like articles that have something to say. This is a book with a clear purpose for a sense of comfort. I won't teach you any more water techniques.

This urge to get married, from the first chapter to the seventy-fourth chapter, has no result. Even though she said she wanted to marry, she still succeeded but she didn't. Even though she said she didn't want to marry, this incident still has no result yet.

Is this book the kind of level-pressing studio book that only adds proficiency in exercises, but not one's own realm?

Your uncle? Such a big mistake...

The core purpose of cultivating immortality is to live forever, become stronger, or to prosper together with the family. In fact, there is nothing interesting about urging marriage. The biggest problem is that there are too many characters who appear in the early stage. After Chapter 20, I only know that the protagonist has a system for obtaining alchemy entries with probability, and a proficiency system panel. Then he goes to the alchemy family to make alchemy. The protagonist relies on golden fingers to refine higher-quality elixirs. The eldest lady and the elder compete with each other for the protagonist. Things developed too fast in more than twenty chapters, and the progress was too fast. Discover golden fingers, test golden fingers, alchemy techniques, alchemy scenes, ordinary elixirs and high-quality special appearance phenomena are somewhat different. Many things are not laid out or detailed. The details are appropriate, but now there are too many. It does not reflect the difference and scarcity of alchemist levels. The economic system is a bit broken There is no need for so many relationships between characters to appear all at once. You can first carefully describe the protagonist's personality, personality, and way of doing things. To be a Taoist person, one must have a Taoist spirit, and to be extremely intelligent is to have something specific to be extremely intelligent. Otherwise, just say that a person with extraordinary intelligence must inherit the family. Where is the early manifestation of extraordinary intelligence? A family heir or acting family head needs to consider a lot. The stacking up of many factors such as decision-making, courage, planning, and support behind him pushed him to this position. The most important thing is that it has developed into a big family in the world of immortality. It is not easy for anyone to hold a high position. It didn't describe what huge benefits the protagonist brought to the family, or made the family stronger, and the character design was not supported. Supporting characters can start with a fixed number, develop slowly, and then you can expect to see their talents gradually revealed.

The physical body of a Qi-training monk is the same as that of a mortal. In the later stages of Qi-training, he can save people from the middle stage of foundation building or to perfection. Awesome

A little better than the other Goldfinger book, but not much