Super Hunter: Starting from Taking Care of Qingmei

New book issue QAQ

I saw that Chapter 12 was well written and the plot was good. However, the author writes more casually, which leads to some contradictions.

Oh, it's free for a limited time... The subject matter is good, but the pace of the opening chapter is too fast. If you polish the early stage, especially the kind of monster-killing upgrade that gradually becomes stronger, and you can get a satisfying result by picking up the known information, it will be much better, but it is too hasty. Slow down a little, put on the shelves fifty chapters, it's best to change jobs at this time as a rhythm point.

I was exhausted after reading more than 900 chapters in the previous book 🙂. Territory development for a long time felt useless. The heroic units were so outrageous that they turned the city defense function into a decoration, which made it lonely to redeem rewards every time the version was updated. Take a look at this one. How many copies does this one need? 🙂

That one has not been finished yet, but this one has been seamlessly spliced ​​together. The author is so fierce.

Has the author considered that adding points along with intelligence can make memory clearer? Otherwise, it would be too exaggerated to seem to be able to recall everything. People's memory can actually beautify many things. For example, in MOBA games, there are always people who think that the old version of a certain hero is very powerful and fun, but in fact it is just the result of memory beautification.

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Brother, your writing is very good. Let me give you a little suggestion, that is, you should be more restrained when it comes to female characters. It does not mean that at least the first character has deep feelings. The snake in the second character is okay, but it will be difficult to handle after that. You are not very good. When other characters are not all present, you describe the feelings of a certain character too deeply. This will be very awkward. If a new harem is added later,

The descriptions in some places are too game-mechanical and need to be balanced. Otherwise, it feels like you are really watching the author typing something.

What has the author written before? Is this coming ashore?

Is there too much collected in this village? Try to write it down in a memorized way, don't go too far.

Twenty thousand words updated a day is still too authoritative.

Except for the fact that the data often doesn't match up, the rest is okay, and the plot is still okay.

The audience for hunters feels so small, even monster spawners can't even see it.

Want to see more female protagonists🙂

To be honest, the title of the book is not attractive enough. I didn't even think of clicking on it when I first read it.

The game ability is brought into a different world Start to upgrade the rhythm of fighting monsters The contradictions between the three villains in the early stage become smoother as they are written See the latest chapter in one breath The author's connection method includes paving the way through information about the game career and connecting through the early character relationships Very game ➕ sense of mission Whether it is a game to play or a novel to read, it is very interesting The only worry is the subsequent processing of new scenes and the establishment of new character relationships. The blacksmith woman may be used as an intermediate point to spread, it depends on the connection.

I don't know why not many people read your new book. I think it's quite good.

Why is there only one chapter in the update?

New books are updated twice a day, and old books are updated once a day. I think there needs to be a balance.

So ha!

How do I join a group? I didn't get approved even though I did.

I just caught up on the latest chapter today, and then stopped updating for a day? 🙂🙂🙂🙂

Good looking! Five monthly passes, please add more.