Frozen Apocalypse: I Create the Perfect Territory

After reading more than 500 chapters, the basic plot direction and characters are pretty good, not too novice, and the setting is also quite attractive. But it can also be seen that the author's writing skills are still relatively immature, and many descriptions and dialogues are too shallow and white. The description of character behavior is also relatively one-sided and thin, and the behavioral motivations are too stereotyped. Although the world setting looks large, there are very few story lines and branches actually displayed. It is obvious that the author is also aware of this. The perspective almost never leaves the protagonist, which is worthy of recognition. Furthermore, there are many bugs. The setting itself is actually a game-based numerical setting. However, because of the introduction of clothing and global travel settings, and the author also wants to show that this is a real world, it leads to many conflicts in content settings, environmental performance, combat performance, character performance, etc. Overall, I can give it a score of 7. It is an okay, invincible and refreshing harem novel.

It's very beautiful, it's a game-like world, the characters and skill values ​​are written in great detail, it's a harem flow, the plot is smooth, and there are a lot of passionate scenes.

I haven't watched it yet, but I guess the author also pre-ordered Frostpunk 2

So well written! Faster and faster!

Does your brother, the author, know that you wrote this novel?

I got excited and saw that the advertisement was written into a book.

Doesn't the author have any brothers? Wouldn't it be embarrassing for acquaintances to see it? I want to play with my sister-in-law all day long!

Anyway, every time I see this kind of book written about global forums, regional forums are always particularly dramatic. Don't you have experience in working in large groups? When I have a small group of less than 100 people, talking is like brushing pictures. I have to press and hold to read information. What's more, in this insecure place, it is a global or regional group. I can't see clearly at all. Well, brushing is so fast.

I suggest you change the title of the book. This title dissuades many people. If others don't know it, they think it's incest. If I hadn't read the review, I wouldn't have read it.

There are many bugs that you can pass by without thinking, but if you click on the comment area, someone will remind you that there is a bug, which will look very uncomfortable 😅

I've read more than 160 chapters, and overall it's pretty good. But when I saw this, I gradually discovered something. For example, in team battles, the protagonist always likes to be a puppet master, controlling all combat units, down to adding blood, skills, and even left and right displacement controls. To be honest, if the protagonist's team members were all puppets with no IQ and no emotions, I would praise "The protagonist operates 666", but in fact they are all living intelligent creatures. As a combatant, I feel it is really a shame if you are not sure about the most basic positioning and timing of skill release. Anyone who has played team battle games knows that the team leader will only issue simple and efficient commands, and the team members will control everything else. When to replenish buffs, heal, attack, and output, basically everyone is aware, and this is the team. A team that looks like all puppets really looks weird. I really want to know, if there is no reminder from the protagonist, is it possible that the heroine holds the treatment in her hand and watches her teammates die?

The protagonist always exchanges some blueprints for turrets, defense towers, artillery and crossbows and then spends resources on construction, production, and upgrades. However, for the base as a whole, they are just decorations and have no effect. The enemy's main units have already reached the level of demigods and legends. These buildings have no defensive effect at all, and every time The number of active monsters to attack is also measured in large numbers. They rely entirely on the hero characters under the protagonist and the combat units of each type to superimpose buff attributes for defense and attack. If you want to rely on these defense towers and trebuchets, which can only be placed in the base and have no mobility and cannot superimpose buffs, Only by cooperating with the improvement of combat effectiveness can we kill the enemy. The protagonist's territory has been destroyed n times. It is better to use resources on functional and resource-based buildings to strengthen the resource production and more functional support of the territory. Other survivor lords may really need to rely on turret defense buildings and weapons to cooperate with the battle. Units are used to deal with enemies and improve their survivability, but I have never seen them play any role in the protagonist's territory. They all rely on the support of their characters and combat units of various arms. If these legendary and heroic main combat units cannot withstand it, can the base turret trebuchets and other burdens be able to counterattack? In the story setting, the author has set the capabilities of the character's combat units to a very high limit, which is extremely unbalanced compared to the defensive building and defense weapon units in the base. From the attacks and destruction of cities and kingdoms by the Illuminati and the Blood Legion, it can be clearly seen that turrets and trebuchets are meaningless at all, but the author still repeatedly describes the protagonist changing blueprints to upgrade, build, and produce. In the new expansion pack, the enemies will constantly update new defensive buildings and then become ineffective? It would be more interesting to use more words to advance the plot⋯

This introduction is like that game with small ads that you can get all day long, oh, it seems to be called Endless Winter

Apart from one talent, the male protagonist's other attributes, talents, and skills are too average. Not to mention compared to his subordinates, he is incomparable to the female protagonist. The weapons and skills he drops and buys are basically used by the female protagonist and his subordinates. In a world where power belongs to oneself, even a lord must have strength! Otherwise, when subordinates fight with others, they are afraid that the aftermath will kill the protagonist.

The author of this book should be a southerner who has no idea about low temperatures. Wear short sleeves at the beginning in an environment of minus 20 degrees.

"The whole world is coming, farming with my sister-in-law in the apocalypse"

Can the title of this book be changed? If this shit is seen by people around me, it will not be the death of the society. Moreover, this is not the first time I have read this book. I have been persuaded by the title every time. If it weren't for the book shortage today, I really wouldn't read it🙈

It feels like Changshu Arnold is writing a book. Why is your head so pointy?

Stop writing about men and women. Women are all like this when you see them. It's not interesting at all.

Come on, please finish this Silver League soon.

The plot is still very good, but the word count is always low. Various equipment and skills are always low. After finishing the description, I have to lament and explain how powerful each is. If you have to sigh and explain, why bother writing so much attribute data? Just let the protagonist explain it after reading the attributes. I have to write so many words. It's no wonder that the data of this book is not up. I don't think many people will look at those attribute data. Like me, I just skipped to read it.

I would like to ask, are all the women in the book very shy as long as the protagonist stares at her or touches her hand? Do all women have this kind of personality? Is this still an apocalyptic world?

I watched most of it and the rest was fine. The main reason is that the protagonist chooses a mage at the beginning, and the heroine chooses a knight. As a result, all kinds of adventures and awesome equipment are related to knights. Adventures and equipment were given to the heroine and her subordinates. I don't know what the advantage is of choosing a mage as a profession for the protagonist.

About 5.68 Million words in one and a half years, so terrifying

The current content is all focused on top-level resources, such as relics, divine fire, dominating souls, etc., Not to mention the master soul of the leader, Heart of Power. There are more than a dozen legendaries in the territory, but there seem to be only a dozen heroes, which seems to be a bit of a backlog. In the past, when I just went out and took a few steps, leaders, masters, and these resources were dropped casually. Although we have reached a higher level now, these resources do not seem to improve high-end strength, but they cannot be completely ignored. Just write something down and let the basic soldiers go to the wild to clean up by themselves. It is also acceptable for you to write down the potential master-level strength of all leaders later. After all, there are "three to four million" hero-level lords in the 1st region (most of the Ice Crystal Kingdom). The wild resources will not be enough to support your 6,000 soldiers.

Come on, author, write well, the development is reasonable, I will support it when it is put on the shelf, and the book coins have been charged.

Register territory legends and above equipment and building props and facilities (excluding magic skills of the same level, magic food, alchemy potions, etc.) [Hangyuan Ice Box]------Cao Xing------Legend [Demon Code]------Cao Xing-------Legend [Starfall Code]------Cao Xing------Legend [Moon Staff]------Cao Xing------Legend --Legend [Dagger of Death]------Sarah Blade Dance------Legend [Dance of Fine Snow]------Binglan. Dragon Whisperer------Legend [Avalanche Ridge]------Qinon Dutra-------Legend [Sword of the Lake Lady]------Assam-------Legend [Colorful Magic Shield]------Liu Muxue-------Legend [Scythe Armor]------Andrew------Legend [Code of Nature]------Andrew------Legend [Elegy of the Years]------Renice------Legend [Skyfire Scripture]------Gracia Nika-------Demigod [Decay Shoulder Strap]------Legend [Golden Dragon Horn]------Marenina ------Artifact [Flying Dragon Leather Clothes]------Marenina Absorbed------Legend [Weeping Blood Kunming]------Magic Weapon------God Level [Spider King Scepter]-------Xilda-------Legend [Mechanical Heart]------Tong Chuchu-------Demigod [Storm Battle Axe]------Bo Jie. Sun Chaser------Artifact br>[Angel Wings]------Liu Muxue------Unknown [Oracle Robe]------Isabel. Gospel------Legend [Bible of Light]------Isabel. Gospel------Demigod [Frost Tribulation. Thousand Snow Sword]------Legend [Eye of the Observer]------Cao Xing-------Demigod [Ark of Destiny]-- ----Cao Xing------Elementary Artifact [Jihadist Plate Armor]------Marenina. Absorption------Legend [Evangelist Robe]------Marenina. Absorption------Legend [Abyss Scale Armor]------Marenina. Absorption------Legend [Cold Domain Ice Armor]----Marenina. Absorption------Legend [Extreme Cold Demonic Insect Ice Armor]----Marenina. Absorption------Legend [Night Rhinoceros Armor]------Sarah Blade Dance------Legend [Shadow Touch Ring]------Sarah Blade Dance------Legend [Shadow Heart Necklace]------Sarah Blade Dance------Legend [Armplate of the King of Alien]------Assam------Demigod [Dragon Legend Medal]------Cao Xing------Legend [Code of the God of Ice and Snow]------Cao Xing------Legend [Rat King's Diamond Pickaxe]------Cao Xing------Legend [Heart of the Deep Necklace]------Cao Xing------Demigod [Shake Ring of the Abyss]------Cao Xing------Demigod [Eye of Corruption Staff ------Farnaz------Legend [Forbidden Curse Robe]------Farnaz------Demigod [Hurricane Dance Armor]------Renice------Legend [Black Abyss Blood Slaughter Armor]------Bertier. Sun Chaser------Legend [Frost Core Eternal Hammer]------Harold. Iceberg------Legend [Divine Tribulation Sword . Black Holy Grail]------Marenina------quasi-artifact [Whale Fall. Deep Sea Blood Song]------Xiao------Demigod [Ice Soul. Starfall Longbow]------Elisa-------Legend [Eldridge Pharmacopoeia]------Francesca------Legend [Dice of the God of Luck]------Cao Xing-------Legend [Nai Sha's Ring of Blessing]------Cao Xing------Legend [Eternal Night Whisper·God Killer]------Xiao------Demigod [Radiant. Knight King Armor]------Assam------Demigod [Archlich's Frost Soul Robe]------Cao Xing------Legend [Archlich's Ice Bone Leggings]------Cao Xing------Legend [ Archlich's Frost Soul Boots] ------Cao Xing ------Legend [Winter. Brilliant Ice Crystal War Armor]--Marenina absorbs--Legend [Extreme cold. Unbreakable Ice Core Armor]--Marenina absorbs Receive--Legend [Cold Prison. Instant Prison Judgment Pistol]------Tong Chuchu------Legend [Huangtian. Embers Create Arms]----Marenina----Quasi-Artifact [The Beginning of Shield-Anodit]------Bron------Legend [Ancient Sword-Magdale]------Liu Muxue------Legend [Frost Whisper. Cloak of the Blizzard Messenger]-Marenina Absorption-Legend [Two-Headed Ogre's Savage Staff]------Legend (Note: The full version of the Holy Scripture has touched the "pseudo-artifact", and the divine fire needs to be ignited to be fully exerted Ministry of Power) Territorial buildings and fixed facilities props: [Lord Temple]------Legend [Lucky Altar]------Legend [Pale Holy Tree]------Legend [Ancient Tree of Life]-------Legend [Mosin's Pillar]-------Legend [Holy Monument of Apocalypse]------God Level [Eye of Creation]------God Level [Across Teleportation Array]------Legend [Dream Library]------Legend [Skywalker Chariot] × 2------Legend [Ancient Frost Cannon]------Demigod [Static Magic Shield]-------Legend [Frost Cliff Wall]------Legend [Dramaman Light Cannon] × 7------Demigod [Eternal Frost. Cliff City Wall------Demigod [Continental level communication base station]------Legend [Blood Destroyer Tower]

Writing about games is a bit of an understatement. I could definitely write a high-quality fantasy book.

Author, did you know that this novel was made into an anime?

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