In Shrouding the Heavens, Rewards Await Across the Myriad Worlds

High emotional intelligence: The author still has a lot of room for improvement!

Awesome, the quasi-emperor body can't beat the Great Sage with the Sun Emperor Punch

Put poison at the beginning? A contemporary descendant of the hegemonic lineage who killed his opponent in the past? Then when faced with a plot, did Dacheng Hegemon take action to explode the Taoist soldiers, or did the other party hold back and escape with his life? Do you want to see what Goba you wrote? The other party retaliated, plotted against Dacheng Ba Ti, and took action from a distance, and then he still held back? Couldn't you just write about being seriously injured during a siege and then escaping for your life?

I don't understand why the protagonist came to the third heaven at once. From the previous description, it seems that the protagonist is a genius with imperial talent, but it is not enough. It is not clear what adventures the protagonist has had and what methods he has created, and he has not accumulated any foundation to directly survive the three tribulations.

It takes hundreds of moves to defeat a great sage with a quasi-emperor body. It depends on whether you can accept it.

It's not well written. The protagonist's thinking is very childish and his words and actions don't look like an intelligent creature.

It seems that the author has not read the original work,

It seems that the author has 4 works with 100,000 orders each. . .

The writing is really so-so, you don't know when the world will change. Change the world and follow the title of the previous world, one piece.

Finally, I have a book about Ba Ti that I can read, it's pretty good.