Return to Hogwarts: from Legacy to Professor

This book has nothing to do with refreshing articles. If you want to read refreshing articles, you can quit. The protagonist is not happy with Avatar, and Seba enters Azkaban It is not purely game values, the game values ​​​​are too supermodel The protagonist is purely from the 19th century, and he time travels after graduation

After reading more than ten chapters, the protagonist was knocked unconscious by his own magic at the beginning, and then he woke up and went to Azkaban, but he still didn't resist? According to the talents in the game, after graduation, you still can't cast spells without weapons? It's been more than ten chapters and an elf's magic can't be broken. The protagonist's strength has not been shown. You said it can be done without the Avatar. The key is the ancient magical power, but you have not shown it. What is the meaning of having Huo Yi's name? It's cool. It's been more than ten chapters and there is no ghost. Do you have the patience to read on?

The characters and plot are pretty good, but I feel that the language is a bit too "Chinese". Some of the dialogues and speaking styles sound like completely Chinese language, which is not suitable for being placed in a Western text. It looks a little bit dramatic.

The plot description is pretty good until the protagonist leaves campus, but after that the pace and the rigor of the story start to get weird. It can be seen that the author wants to write a plot that is different from the original work, but many plots have many logical loopholes if you think about it carefully. In particular, in order to take into account the plot and elements of the original work, the plot of the fight against the basilisk was lengthened. But the danger factor of the basilisk is too high. Logically speaking, as soon as we know the possible entrance and exit of the secret room, we should immediately conduct a thorough inspection of the toilet. Even if it is demolished, we must go in, or at least send someone to guard there to catch the murderer. Instead of the old and the young staying in the office and chatting for a few words, only suspecting and not checking, there is no mystery. Even if Lao Deng deliberately set up the trial to train Harry, he should have let him go after eliminating the threat or personally guarding him (I suspect this is what the original book did), instead of running off to France and letting a "senior" who had only known him for less than a year take care of him. Could it be that if Old Deng stayed in the school invisibly, would he really be afraid of being found out by those losers from the Ministry of Magic? Although I have complained so much, at least this is really one of the few fan works with online quality in recent times. I only hope that the author can continue to improve...

In the fifth grade, he was able to control other people's emotions and strike lightning. When he graduated, he at least didn't use ancient magic. He was more powerful than a normal professor. As a result, the various events did not change at all, and his personality did not change. I can only say that it was normal on the roadside.

It's actually quite well written, so good luck to the author.

Is this discontinued? Didn't pass the first copy

The writing is smooth, the style is relatively mature, and the understanding and description of the original characters are in-depth, rather than flat and paper-like, and the original characters are not cluttered (currently). It is a delicate story about the aboriginal people who did not appear in the original work who traveled from a hundred years ago and interacted with the characters to create a chemical reaction. I hope that the quality of the writing will continue to be maintained in the future.

Four questions: 1. Hufflepuff's gold cup was given to Bellatrix by Voldemort, and then placed in Gringotts' warehouse, with a trap set. But this book was written as a gift to a German Death Eater, and this Death Eater took it out so casually? 2. Although it is said that Dumbledore asked the protagonist to hold the Sorting Hat, I watched "Killing the Basilisk" several times and never saw how Harry got Gryffindor's sword. Suddenly the protagonist asked Harry to kill the Basilisk with a sword, and then Harry looked at the sword in his hand, and the sword just appeared? 3. As the inheritor of ancient magic, the protagonist of Legacy only used two blinding spells to defeat the basilisk? There are more than 60 chapters related to ancient magic. The only traces of ancient magic seen in the basilisk are the traces of ancient magic. No matter how much you want to suppress the protagonist's stats, you have to write a better reason. 4. The character of the protagonist is also inconsistent. At first, he acted like a good teacher, but later he allowed Harry and others to investigate when he knew it was a basilisk. He even ran away because the Ministry of Magic wanted to arrest the protagonist. He also instigated students to secretly film and follow him. And when Dumbledore also ran away, he still had the arrogance to investigate the Gaunt family without informing the professors that it was a basilisk. He really didn't worry about the basilisk killing students and professors.

I just saw Chapter 12, it was surprisingly good. At the beginning, Azkaban was bailed out by Dumbledore. This is quite a bit of a rant, a bit cliché. What happened next was quite interesting. The graduates traveled to the future and returned to Hogwarts, and once again entered the school on a flying carriage. Some details also make people smile, such as the underground business in Knockturn Alley, the emergency taxi for free (Muggles may find it a bit offensive (), and the amusing children on the flying carriage. Looking at it, I feel that the writing is also very good. Support! In addition, what does the title "Revised" mean? Has the story been significantly changed?

As far as the three golden chapters are concerned, the first chapter is pretty good. The beginning of Azkaban is a bit interesting It gets better starting from the thirteenth chapter and I can shoulder the responsibility of a professor

It's so beautiful🥹I just love the daily flow and the Ma Tianlong family finally got their comeuppance! The law of heaven is clear! ! The law of heaven is clear! ! !

I am currently re-reading Chapter 3 But why do I feel that the version without modification looks better?