Poor Ghost Lord, What the Hell Is It with the City of Night at Your Back?

Advantages: The creativity is novel, and the characters of the two protagonists are more prominent Disadvantages: The plot is seriously intellectually depressing, and the description of plot twists is not sophisticated enough. The subsequent plot advancement has the feeling of beating a small boss to a big boss, and is pushed by the big hand of the Supreme God Ps: I suspect that the author is a foot control + virgin

I won't mention the simplest and most common all-out treatment. Military stimulants and ordinary stimulants alone are a big deal. Sell ​​a bottle to the Master, and others will chant for ten seconds and you will have three seconds. Sell a bottle to the warrior and charge with the arrow rain spell. This is still legal, but it is not legal to take out the Tiger Claw Gang's Shining, mix it with other things to reduce the content and sell it to the nobles, or take out the Scavenger's telepath, tell people some stories after using it, and you can start a sect directly.

It's quite interesting, but when the protagonist starts a company, it feels like he needs to fight a war to get it started. Otherwise, it would be brand new materials, something Western fantasy. It can be considered a new industrial revolution.

Dual protagonists plus cyberpunk and western fantasy

It looks a bit like a female video, you can't watch it with your brain, and you force pig's feet to find enemies.

It's okay, it's pretty good to watch, but the aura of intelligence reduction from the people around me is too serious, sacrificing rationality, and there is always a sense of obstruction when reading, like a pre-made dish, it can kill time, but it is not very comfortable to watch.

The quality before it was put on the shelves was barely passable. After it was put on the shelves, it was pure AI writing. If you don't believe it, you can buy the first 20 chapters after it was put on the shelves. It's so rubbish.

You let biotechnology and even Europe know that you have magical powers. Through the company's undercover agents, almost the entire cyber world knew about it. How do you survive? They can fire railguns casually, and human greed will make them study you thoroughly at all costs. Can your poor strength now fight against a cyber world? I don't know what you're going to write next, are you complicit? Forced confrontation? I think the European giants in the cyber world, and even AI, can use some inhuman means and technological power to eat you up. This is a new force. Human greed is endless. Moreover, in the cyberpunk world where there are no rules and regulations, you really have nowhere to escape in this world. I can't stand it anymore, and I don't even want to see how you continue to make it up. You kind of treat the cyberpunk world as a retard. It's too childish.

As for the protagonist's local name, you can't write it down just because the protagonist's family background is hidden. Using your Chinese name everywhere in the Western Fantasy World would be too dramatic.

The creativity is quite good, and it has a sense of novelty. However, the plot arrangement is a bit cliche, a bit immature, and there are a lot of little poisonous points, which is close to the grain.

If you are not talented enough, you can use resources to pile up. Going back and forth between the two worlds, there is always a time to stand out. This time you will use your arms, next time you will use your thighs, what will you use next time? Brain? Is that really you? I personally believe that matter determines consciousness. If your matter changes, will your consciousness not change? If in the end they are all prosthetics and their consciousness is stored in the database, is that really me? Isn't it AI? Moreover, technology is always developing. No matter how good you are at pretending, you are still not as good as the inventors who designed top-level prosthetics, because they were designed by others, and they must be the best. I have said so much, just one sentence. It's either original or a little strange. Just like love, everyone should hope that their significant other also engages in pure love, right?

Too little has been written about 2077, and too much has been written about fantasy worlds.

The idea is very good, but the plot is a bit cliche

Isn't it on the shelves yet? There is a lot of content to write about. Whether it is expanding the territory in Western Fantasy, harvesting resources, or attacking companies in cyberspace, and collecting technology, in the end, it can be returned to a revolutionary route. Liberation, liberation, it is difficult to write it well, but it is amazing once you write it.

Trumpet Douluo won't release a new book even if he says it will be released. Are you making a fool of yourself? Have your teammates guessed what's in your head?

Write more about the plot of 2077. The fantasy world is all original. I read this book just for the plot of cyberpunk with extraordinary powers.

The plot has been very boring since the destruction of the furnace. The same paragraphs are repeated. For example, the house number of the dwarves is repeated too many times. It was interesting once or twice, but it was boring many times. The words of the scene where fried chicken is handed to the dwarves are almost the same twice. Author, you need to add more oil, otherwise I will give up.

Not bad, it's not too bad but has a bit of energy. Dude, Zhengshu Huang is here, it's good to read.

As the title says, Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Is too wet. The exact same plot has been in the water for how many days. Author, if you don't survive, you can rest for a few days. You are fooling me like this and I am going to be rehabilitated.

I read all the way through the previous chapters today and voted for the rest of the month Others have some minor flaws but they are innocuous But when it comes to the chapter about the resurrection of the devil, it starts to look bad I feel like the author got too excited and didn't consider the readers I want to use the blacksmith shop as an introduction to step by step to the climax br>But the reader's impression is that apart from the introduction, there is a lot of hydrology In addition, it pushes the different world to the finale too early The cyberpunk world also suddenly involves world-class forces It feels a bit unfinished or a precursor to completion

Che Luolun's words went back and forth, and he retreated.

The introduction is quite interesting, but I don't know if it's good or not.

I feel a bit AI, the sentence repetition is too severe

Not enough😢

I've read his third book, it's getting better and better. Come on

It's so funny, but it feels a bit too self-pleasant.

These two titles are different, but the content is the same. What a fool.

Isn't it good to just make money by writing fan fiction? Why do fan authors think of originality when they achieve some success in writing🙂