Douluo: Starting from the Willow Stick and Stepping into the Sky

After pursuing the full subscription till now, my thoughts are: In the early stage, I started from the scientific fitness and customized growth project approach, which is very attractive. It gradually grows in the middle period, but the original highlight of scientific fitness has been changed to follow the main line of the original work. The growth of combat power has changed from science to traditional elixirs and soul bones. Although it is unconventional, it still maintains the rhythm of the plot. It is very refreshing to see. But when it came to the exchange student plot, it felt like water began to be added to the text. More and more explanatory text was added, and the pace of the plot began to become slower and slower. Overall worth seeing.

Yes, I thought that the Lingzhu Divine Sword, three in one, would be invincible in the world, but I didn't expect that there are still masters. It's just that when the protagonist was over 40 levels, you were greedy for level 3 and there were many typos. Everything else is great👍👍👍.

Three points of practice, seven points of eating, 90 points rely on black technology. First month: I will definitely lay the foundation for pure natural practice. Third month: Drinking protein powder will not harm your body. Second year: Creatine glucose is not normal Third year: I should prepare steroids with less side effects Fourth year: I should try to study five types of compounds Fifth year: I should be able to withstand nuclear radiation Sixth year: Touch a nuclear reactor Seventh year: Mondo can go wherever he wants Finally: The power of Nine Dragons to pull the coffin helps me ascend to the divine world The next day, bad news came from Douluo Circle. The famous titled Douluo Chen Ping was backlashed by the power of Kowloon to pull the coffin Has ascended to the steroid world

This book can currently be divided into two parts. The first part is the grassroots stage, which is well written. The protagonist is full of subjective initiative, calculation, planning, and understanding. This stage basically lasts until the end of the competition. The second paragraph is from the stage after the game to the present. The protagonist relies entirely on Yi Lao and basically devalues his identity as a time traveler to 0. Both mathematics and knowledge have weakened, and the plan for the world is gone. He is completely stuck in the world view built by the third young master of the Tang family, which is mainly about battle armor and soul guides. He constantly emphasizes The accumulation of wisdom of certain gods over hundreds of years exists objectively. However, once it is emphasized, it means that the author does not want to write something that requires brains. Everything is left to Yi Lao, an external brain. Any plans, social understanding, and resource allocation can be "taken with both hands and get what you want." The perception of this stage has declined rapidly. Especially since the system is the power of the world, it is extremely demoralizing and a great stranglehold on the vitality of the work. You are already writing Douluo fandom. Can you be more clear-headed? Without dlc, how can you write exciting enough? Can't you follow the ideas in the book "The Beast of Fear"? I currently hope that there will be a third stage, where those early theoretical frameworks will be picked up, and the protagonist will delve into a new set of things by himself, instead of climbing the technology tree exactly according to the set of things written by Tang San, because that set of things can be guessed by readers.

It's like the title, but I have to say that this is one of the best Douluo fanfics I've seen. The others are either a lot of poisonous people who are in love with the opposite sex every day, or they are the kind of people who have just started the Soul King Soul Sect, or they are the kind of pseudo-fanfics that have nothing to do with the main plot. The author's semi-refreshing style is the most attractive. This book is thoughtful and refreshing. I really like the protagonist's feeling of being similar to others. I will support the author and hope the author writes more (I love reading it)

Ahem, here I want to say something about the growth line of the protagonist in this book First of all, the so-called skills frequently discussed in the book about Tang San are all copied, but the protagonist is not much better, that is, the stick skills in the early stage are still somewhat technical, but in the later stage, they are on the old path of Douluo. They are all Yi Lao's skills. What else can the protagonist do besides some knowledge? Science is not just idolatry! It is a methodology that summarizes the world! The early technology tree of stick skills and potions is completely abandoned! I originally wanted to see how the protagonist's stick skills can be used to create some self-created soul skills, but the exchange student didn't see any of the potions after passing them. With the fairy grass, I didn't want to turn it into a potion and then pierce it, so just eat it raw? We read fanfics for different developments. How is this different from the original work? Let's talk about Yi Lao in this book. The Yi Lao in this book is purely a mechanical tool for deity. If it is difficult to know the truth without Yi Lao, then I admit it, but why do you beat him every day? What about the post-war summary and technological development? Have you forgotten? There is also the line of technology. The protagonist has no thought about the nature of the world at all, and has no intention of exploring soul rings and other phenomena unique to other worlds. How about you study fusion? Finally, there is the problem of the protagonist's operation. The protagonist is the same as Tang San. He has almost nothing of his own and has not thought about how to create his own soul skills. The only one who deliberately punches is Mu En's technique. He only has one more blood energy. Can't he continue on the path of blood energy? The protagonist's martial spirit is a stick, but what about the skill tree that follows the stick? I think of three development routes for the protagonist. Continue to inject acupuncture to strengthen blood and soul power. There are plug-ins for mental power, but it is easier to replenish it and become the god of blood. Research on the combination of soul guides and technology, and recover Poseidon's remote power. Ancient soul guidance technology, use soul guidance tools to become the god of technology With the help of the power of the system, combined with a large amount of power of destiny, you can completely control your own bad luck, and jump to the god of destiny through the principle of interdependence of blessings and misfortunes Even more By studying the strange life of the undead, we can understand life and death, build a complete life and death system, and become the God of Reincarnation The protagonist keeps killing and killing, and his way of thinking is becoming more and more like Tang San. He wants to kill the whole world of gods at every turn, and the pig nose operations are becoming more and more frequent. I know this is the reason why the author has lost his previous stability and peace due to the passage of time, and has slowly begun to feel bored I also know that this book is already good, and the protagonist is just dizzy sometimes. After the original work There is nothing to write about in this period. Above level 70, according to the principle of skipping levels, you can basically not beat the protagonist. You can only skip everything that can be written as soon as possible and write more about the research and theoretical thinking of the protagonist to make the protagonist appear smarter and more talented. Do more. Develop some self-created technologies For example, new undead on the undead side, whether a soul guide made entirely of bones can give birth to new undead, integration of abilities on the soul power side, understanding the truth that one's own martial soul can evolve, and independent completion of Experimental Subject Zero on the soul guide side. Complete body, create a god's machine, a new way of training on the blood side, imitate the dnf Hell Blood Demon God (Berserker) or the Lord of Blood Hell (Blood Mage) to develop a complete blood training skill tree, on the technical side, long weapons can use self-created soul skills, or boxing can use self-made soul skills. Soul-creating skills and the like Of course, these are very in-depth topics. The current protagonist should only be able to touch on some hints and not be able to go into depth. It is also excusable that there is no distracting energy during the sun-moon war The above!

Personally, I feel that generally speaking, for all martial spirits, the first two hundred-year soul skills recommend soul rings that add special skills or attributes to the martial soul. The most obvious example is Tang San's "Parasite" (other than this particularity, the first three soul skills are essentially entanglement, and the Blue Silver Herb can inherently entangle). The following examples include adding other or special attributes to martial souls, such as "soul-eating", "simulation", "invisibility", "clone" or special perception and other special skills. Not only are they miraculous, but they will not be eliminated in the future. At the second level, there are also "Spider Armor" and other skills that strengthen the foundation of martial arts, which are all suitable. And I personally feel that Douluo World is not suitable for a multi-element attribute increase of a martial soul, neither three nor four, neither up nor down, unless it is a god-level angel martial soul with multiple attributes, or even a silver wolf that has multiple attributes. Otherwise, you can only stick to single attributes or related dual attributes.

Accept Xuanzi and Grandma Manyi 🙂

Good guy, I looked through the table of contents and found that chapter 372 is only the fourth chapter. You don't even have the courage to read on.

So cool

Suddenly discovered that Huo Yuhao was being trained by Tang San emmmm

Fans who read Douluo recently felt a little emotional. Take Dou Yi as an example: 1. The setting of Douluo is too poor (the impression is that they are all about playing games, and the enemies are inexplicably friendly) 2. The power system of Douluo is difficult to evaluate (I am very impressed by Zhao Wuji... It should be called this, allowing hidden weapons to break defenses) 3. According to the logic in the book, it is difficult to imagine that ordinary martial soul owners do not form a powerful organization (ordinary martial souls are universal enough that they can customize soul skills, and there are no soul skills in soul skills) (anti-golden body) 4. Bloodline theory, martial soul theory, serious tendency, etc. As an old book, Douluo has fulfilled its historical mission very well, but in the current environment, its content is not enough to support fan creation. When fan authors enter the later stages of creation, they often fall into the dilemma of not having a lot of time to conceive of the beginning, and not having the original work to rely on. I think this is also the reason why many Douluo fans are unable to complete the book. Many fan authors do not have as high a level of creative ability as the masters, and they will inevitably transfer a large amount of the original text later (a common problem in online text creation, lack of time). The problem is that the original text of Douluo is unsatisfactory at the moment, and Douluo itself does not have a suitable follow-up to fill in the old works, which further aggravates this contradiction.

There's a reason why I feel like it's not a good one. It doesn't count as a cool novel, but it actually excludes a lot of people who read Douluo. The first part is pretty good. I couldn't stand it at all when I saw the old lady who killed Zhou Zhou and felt uncomfortable there. The crimes were too numerous to describe, and I actually wanted to kill someone, and I was having a psychological struggle there. I couldn't stand the garbage disposal at all.

Is it still okay? How to add poison properties to the main martial spirit stick... Shouldn't it add life, wood, weight, strength, hardness, etc.? And let's not mention the strength of the poison attribute for the moment. I won't say anything about sharp swords, knives, and guns. You stick...

Alas, there is no way, the foundation of Douluo Continent is too poor, and it will collapse later if we don't fix it, but instead of spending that much effort on it, we might as well write a new book and just learn from the level settings (although San Shao's own settings are not much different from common beast-controlling texts 😥)

The idea is good, but it's too watery. I've written so many chapters for one upgrade assessment, and it's only the second level now. Moreover, the contribution of the protagonist's flying soul guide is enough to exchange for several thousand years of soul bones. The martial soul upgrade can be speeded up.

Let's just take over Mr. Lin from Treasure Reward Pavilion. That Lin Huiqun, who has money and strength, will rise to great heights as soon as Lao Deng dies.

The recent content is not very good, I should be rushing to finish it. It is easy to write like this in the later stage of Dou Er, But the disadvantage of this writing method is that it does not look good. Douluo has no reasonable and systematic expression of the dynasty struggle for hegemony at all. If the author does not lay out this area in the early stage, it will be really difficult to write in the later stage. It is recommended to skip this section quickly. In fact, it is still the same problem. In the later period, the subjective initiative of the protagonist decreases, and the playability and explorability of the world view are eliminated.

Why are you so determined to join Shrek? Are you afraid that Tang San won't be able to discover you, an outsider?

I just watched it for a while and I feel like there is a bug. If Tang San had indeed arranged for Huo Yuhao and as the protagonist thought, he had already paid attention to Electrolux so he couldn't rob him, then what are Tang San's real methods on Wang Dong? Tang San's divine will is very likely to exist, otherwise Huo Yuhao is unlikely to have any power of Haodong. If he contacts Wang Dong and Huo Yuhao under such circumstances, wouldn't he directly expose his alien soul? It is very likely that someone has a spiritual being in their body that is equivalent to a clone. If their spiritual power is wiped out, wouldn't you explode? The alien soul should be obvious to a god-king level existence, right? They can both observe fate and predict the future, and there are examples of God Shura and Tang San. Looking at the protagonist's behavior in this way, it is very risky. You can't criticize the system at this time. Even if there is a system to block it, the protagonist does not know that the system may be able to block it. In this way, the protagonist's behavior is to reduce intelligence.

Come

The settings are all interesting, but the quality drops significantly in the last 25% of the book

The image of the suspected protagonist is exposed

A toy Dragon Girl can be sold for 8 million, and a Titled Douluo is only worth a million. It turns out that the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect can invest 40 million in the protagonist with a second-level soul talent. In the competition, a team spent a million gold soul coins to install a set of cannons to defeat the Soul King. These three examples combined are not worth a Titled Douluo. It turns out that the Titled Douluo is only worth a million.

The front part is good, but the back part feels very watery. I don't know why? I just feel like I want to end it quickly and start the next book quickly. . .

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How should I put it? Tianmeng may not be able to get it when he is targeted by Tang Buddha before he becomes a soul master. I don't understand why Electrolux doesn't make money. Since they are all being targeted, why not smash the jar and find an opportunity to assassinate Tang Buddha? That's too boring

It looked great in the early stages, but after I went to Sun and Moon as an exchange student, it started to become average.

Willow sticks and ten-year-old bamboo sticks go well together

What does it mean? The protagonist is 17 years old and is level 48. Lao Huo is 17 years old and is level 51. Dai Huabin is level 61.