Warhammer 40K on the Chessboard

The real world of the protagonist is a bit poisonous, especially the panacea. Anyone who has taken a political class knows that the protagonist is seeking his own death.

Warhammer is okay, Real World is a failure. Unnecessary real-life kinship, warhammer item rewards with unknown meanings, (Want to write a black technology management article? I don't know if it's serious, but it is.)

Don't mention the real world too much. Most people who are interested should want to see Warhammer.

Taking into account readers' reactions, I will vigorously delete all plot lines related to real-life plots. Subsequent rewards will be directed towards chess piece gains. I would give the protagonist more skills that can affect the board, rather than real-world technology.

It's still fun to read it if the author changes his gender. But the full transformation of the original body behind you seems boring, and it feels like the same routine template is repeated over and over again. I just suggested that it would be fun to have both boys and girls. It would not be fun at all if you turned them all into girls.

laughing to death

The introduction is Goge Maoge, right? What is Gomao Goge?

When writing a Warhammer box, just write about the Warhammer world and the protagonist playing chess pieces. If you add urban cool content, it will be very abrupt. Just let the protagonist collect characters and equipment from the Warhammer world to make chess pieces, sell them for money and collect them. To give the protagonist a lot of special benefits, we need to make up for these benefits, so we have to write a lot of plots about the protagonist's real-life activities. When I saw the protagonist's space warrior transformation surgery at the beginning, I could imagine a cool plot where the author would let the protagonist kill the enemies of the East in real life. But I came to see Warhammer, not to read the urban cool article about the return of the Space Marines.

The subject matter is indeed interesting, and the writing is brilliant in some places, but I read the book for the comfort of reading, not to see how you are rich. Some parts are vague and unclear, so forget it. The names of the characters are confusing, sometimes Khorne, sometimes fear, and some chapters are written in a running sequence. Why not streamline it and polish the writing of the following text?

Put those bad guys from Space King in, and beat the pirated version to the genuine version.

Why do I feel like I always miss something, and some unmentioned settings suddenly appear. Feeling a bit messy

There have been a lot of family ethics dramas recently, I hope to watch more fuck time

The real world is not interesting, I just want to watch Warhammer

I can only feel that it is outrageous. Reality is full of flaws. First of all, if you don't hide your technology and are discovered, what do you say? Writing reality directly to death, and then becoming a special hidden subspace secondary god is more reasonable than reality.

They say real-world plots are not good, but I think they are good at least for now. It serves as a link between the past and the next in the plot. Is it any different from traveling to the Warhammer world? Of course, according to what the author said, Iron Man will be released in the real world in the follow-up, then I feel like I'm going to collapse. Get something small - panaceas, laser guns, and artificial humans all belong to the world of improvement, and Iron Man changes the world.

Let's have some abstract chess pieces to provide the author with some ideas Let's start with a big extreme player

Image of the Second Empire

This novel is just a Chunlezi novel. There are too many typos and it feels like the author is more of a novice than a newbie.

What can I say that I came here when I saw the audio novel while watching videos? The author should try not to write realistic content. It is best to make the family aspect nihilistic. After all, everyone comes with Warhammer. If the family aspect is not handled well, it will be a very big poisonous point. In addition, if 40K technology is really brought to reality in the later stage, it will be quite troublesome to deal with it. If it is not done well, it is easy to cause problems. 40K technology is too advanced. In this case, it is 100% safe to compete with national units, but what should we do when the time comes to deal with it? To be honest, it is easy to die suddenly. It is better to try to eliminate reality and other things as nothing as possible. I will see what everyone thinks later. I am considering whether to write about reality. After all, the author is going against the book fans. It is really irrational. If possible, it is better to mention the reality content in one stroke.

Let me talk about the shortcomings of this novel, that is, there are typos. Sometimes some chapters have too many words or too few words. It is also very expensive. You need one piece of 5 pieces of nines. I don't know if the author will change it later.

Hahaha

It feels like there is nothing to do... The plot is not very exciting, the text is so-so, the character design is not well controlled, and the creativity is just a box flow that follows the trend. The full score is 4 points at most.

I saw the audio novel from Station B. Did the author authorize it? The other party didn't seem to mention the title of your book (it took me a while to find it) Video ID: BV1VKwLzHEEE

Come on! I already sent one last month, so try your best this month and see if you can send another one. As long as you can't write to death, write to death.

Please, I want to see The Messenger of the Golden Word

I haven't finished listening to it yet, I thought it was quite interesting, but it's a pity. Looking forward to the next book

Finished? Why did I just watch it?