Swallowed Star: I Have Three Thousand Great Daos

Practicing the method of immortality in the Devouring Starry Sky instead of carrying out local transformation? What do you think

I do understand why there is no mini-destiny technique. Doesn't mini-destiny require krypton lifespan? Devouring lifespan is not worth the money. You can burn the planet for five hundred years to try the water.

Devouring the realm system of majoring in eternal life... I think, for a fanfic with only two world backgrounds, the realm of cultivation is still based on the world where the protagonist lives, with the three thousand avenues as a golden finger. If you want to major in the realm system of the world where Goldfinger is, it's best to write it as Zhu Tianwen Otherwise, the fans of the two books will not be able to outdo each other, and there will definitely be constant quarrels Except for Zhe Tian, ​​there are too many Zhidian

Baffling. Use the tenth level of your physical body as a ninth-level apprentice? The divine transformation of the tenth level of the physical body in eternal life is generally the power of five horses. No matter how awesome the Xuanhuang horse is, it is estimated to be ten thousand kilograms strong. Five horses equals fifty thousand catties. Even the seventh-level God of War who devoured apprentices had more than 50,000 kilograms of strength in the early stages. It's a good subject to write about both worlds. You have to compare realms.

The later stages of immortality are indeed awesome, but what kind of existence is there in the early stages? Read the next chapter. In the realm of divine power, this is the power of a horse, or a thousand pounds, I forgot. Even if it weighs several thousand kilograms, it is still a warrior level. I remember that the Earth in Devouring was a low-class planet, and even weak adults in the starry sky had apprenticeships. But people on Earth are not popular as adults. Normal human beings in the starry sky will reach the planet level after a little cultivation as adults. Unless it is a planet that has been enslaved. All their children and grandchildren became slaves. I kind of forgot about it after so many years. That's probably it. So the protagonist starts with an alien life form. Wasn't it a good start? He also created a realm of divine power. Why did I say immortality and late dick at the beginning? I remember when that Xuxian chased Fang Han. The planet has become a scum existence. Only by devouring ordinary immortals can the star explode. Just the destructive power in the two plots. Swallowing ordinary lords can break the galaxy in battle. I remember the plot where Luo Feng went to a race with giant beasts. The battle between the Lord of that race and the Lord of the Zerg destroyed the galaxy. The previous plot will not be mentioned in Eternal Life. In the middle and late stages, the entire universe in the lower realm of the Golden Immortal was melted. What we talked about in the early stage was that the golden immortal turned into the lower realm of the emperor's immortal clone. Said a lot. One final word. If you can't make it popular, why don't you write about the earth? After all, Earthlings have very high willpower.

When I saw the practice of immortality in Swallowing Starry Sky, I immediately ran away. This book was destined to be a hit.

It's just a lump from beginning to end, and it's still a big lump💩

I still say the same thing, writing fan fiction is just to take advantage of the popularity of the original author. To put it bluntly, it is just picking up leftovers and eating them. You can write whatever you want about the plot, but the basic settings of the original work cannot be changed.

It's this kind of chaotic mixed use of contrasting systems again. . . Can you compare clearly? ? ? ? The good original swallowing system is there, you have to show your big head. . .

It's so disgusting to watch. Can you write in a balanced way and write about eternal life while devouring it? Then don't use the traffic of devouring it.