Swallowed Star: I Have Three Thousand Great Daos

Why not practice immortality techniques in Swallowing Star instead of adapting them to a local context? What were they thinking?

I understand why there's no Minor Fate Technique. Doesn't Minor Fate Technique require spending lifespan? Since consuming lifespan isn't worth much, you can burn through five hundred years on a planet to test the waters.

Within the realm system of devouring the main cultivator's immortality... I think this is a fanfiction with only two world backgrounds, and the cultivation realm is mainly based on the world in which the protagonist lives, with the Three Thousand Great Daos serving as a cheat code.

This is utterly absurd. Using a tenth-level physical body as a ninth-level apprentice level? In the world of immortality, a tenth-level physical body level divine transformation is generally equivalent to the strength of five horses. Even the most powerful Xuanhuang horse can only manage ten thousand jin of strength. Five horses would only amount to fifty thousand jin.

The late-stage Eternal Life realm is indeed powerful, but what kind of existence was the protagonist in the early stages, trying to bluff his way into the Devouring Realm? I glanced at the chapters. The Divine Power Realm is just the strength of a horse, or maybe a thousand catties, I forget. Even if it's a few thousand catties, it's only at the level of a martial artist.

If someone immediately runs away upon seeing someone cultivating immortality in Swallowing the Stars, this book is destined to flop.

I'll say it again: writing fanfiction is basically riding on the coattails of the original author's popularity; frankly, it's just picking up leftovers. The plot can be written however you like, but the basic settings of the original work cannot be changed.

It was a huge pile of poop from beginning to end.

Here we go again with this chaotic and mixed-use comparison... Can you even make a clear comparison? The original, perfectly good system is there, and you have to stick your big head out there...

It's disgusting to watch. Can't you write it in a balanced way? If you're going to write about immortality by exploiting devouring, then don't try to ride on the coattails of devouring.