Immortality Starts from the Immortal Mansion

Who is watching the beginning of the wasteful game of Immortal Mansion now?

I'm really speechless. With the author's IQ, your protagonist has traveled through time, and the plug-in hasn't been activated yet... Why are you so frustrated? Was there no internet access in the mountains before traveling? Shouldn't the protagonist be the one trying hard to activate the golden finger... Shouldn't he be determined in his heart?

It's a bit too cliche now, the author has adventures in everything he does. Can there be opportunities in a few chapters later?

The author feels a bit literary...

I think the author's writing style is okay. Just lack of common sense in life (especially in rural areas)

I guess it won't be long. No one reads the Immortal Mansion genre right now.

I feel that the AI ​​is over-modified and makes reading awkward.

As long as it's not a family story and it's not a novice story like leapfrogging and killing the enemy, you can write it slowly, no matter how slow it is. Come on! It doesn't matter if you go slow

The author Xianfu Changsheng understands it, and if he wants to write, he must transcend it.

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