The Dark Lord of the Extreme Path

It's readable, but it's not great. Many parts are incomprehensible. How could you, a time traveler, have so many emotions? Since there are so many bonds, it's better to write it as a father and son. This book feels like it's copied here and there.

Not enough!!! Author, I think your work is very interesting, but the weather has started to cool down recently. You should pay more attention to updating on time and don't worry about your health. [Doge]

Don't be impressed by yourself, you pure idiot. You are still playing substitution. Don't you want to die? You have traveled through time, so don't play with empathy. Don't play with the Holy Mother these days, because it is too fake.

Alas, the setting of the cultivation system is very nice, but why is it the world of the Republic of China? I really hate the extraordinary Republic of China. It looks better if I replace it with the ancient one. There are too many pressing matters and the social environment is too oppressive.

What rubbish, such a big guy and yet so weak

Without the logical thinking and vision of a time traveler, he is more like a native leopard coming out of the mountains.

Just put half of the ability to write chapter names into the article

Apart from anything else, the most disgusting thing is that the protagonist saves the woman, and the woman helps the protagonist practice. It is obviously a very simple matter, but the protagonist insists on explaining to this woman that he can induce the talent to transform into spiritual dust 😅😅😅

Why do you call yourself a slave after becoming a disciple?

The plot is very brainless. The protagonists have gone out for those troublemakers several times, but the trigger of the incident still keeps triggering on them. Are all the gangs fools? Several supporting characters are poorly arranged, and the protagonist looks even stupider