The Man Who Emerged from the Dark Martial World

The system's points system requires players to win against stronger opponents, and in close-quarters combat at the same level, even using external items yields pitifully few points. The physique reward is also a joke. The 1% reward for cross-border deathmatch is described as a huge boost.

If you're not smart enough, don't write about strategic battles; just do it. Strategic battles are full of loopholes.

These kinds of books are usually capped at 800,000 words, and even 800,000 might be an exaggeration.

The protagonist is mentally unstable and has already dragged his old classmate into this mess. He's still hoarding his points instead of using them. He should first recover to his peak condition, leave a trace somewhere else to lure people away, and avoid further harming his savior's family. Now it's clear the protagonist is extremely selfish.

Instead of constantly pushing boundaries, why not focus on raising the protagonist's level?

The author excels at giving the protagonist burdens, like Han Mo in the beginning and his sister later. These burdens caused the protagonists many troubles, even willing to die to protect them. It's said that cultivating immortality is better because it severs karmic ties first. In this world with this level of power, the population shouldn't be large, yet there are billions. Don't the righteous and evil paths need people to refine pills?

I've noticed some readers have questions about the concept of cultivation levels, so I'll address them all here. This book currently has three levels. They are Blood Rakshasa, Secret Golden Body, and Qi Spirit Treasury. Each of these three levels is further divided into five realms. The Blood Rakshasa mentioned in the book so far. The initial formation of the blood-red skin.

I laughed so hard when I saw the screenshots of the author's comments. This guy kept cursing and kept calling himself a paid reader. I clicked on his profile and laughed again. Dude, he's a newbie user. So, if you're a paid reader, can't you at least pay to read the book?

The overall elements are a style I really like, but it feels a bit abrupt. With a little more polishing, it would be perfect.

Are you kidding me? What's the point of these Twelve Fire God Statues? A bunch of people were fighting over them, and in the end, the main thing was to use a roadside technique obtained through murder. And what's the point of those powerful memories? They're completely useless for your technique fusion, so don't even bother writing about them.