The Apocalypse: My Mobile Fortress Can Upgrade

Well written; it's just that your trade description is too hastily done. There are ten people on the other side, and you have two. You even went and made those deals? Are you out of your mind? Why not just have someone from the other side send over with the list to complete the trade?

The dialogue you wrote, author, is really awkward. In a post-apocalyptic world, would you dare to get off the bus so casually? Trade directly with the city's officials. With your chances of writing 60, you're doomed.

Let me make this clear first: I fully accept the concepts of high-dimensional travel, apocalyptic alternate worlds, and extraordinary abilities, and I will not nitpick based on real-world science. But in a sci-fi novel about lords, shouldn't there at least be some basic self-consistency in the setting?

Author, you're terrible at naming things. Du Weihun? You might as well just call him Du Er. Do you think such a tongue-twisting name is sophisticated?

The romance scenes are a mess; if you can't write them, don't write them at all.

Judging from this introduction, the author understands the concepts of "losing both land and people" and "losing both land and people." It seems the author has read a lot of Mao Zedong's works.

The plot was completely incomprehensible to me.

The only downside to reading on Qidian is that once you click into a novel, there are character introductions that spoil the entire story before you even start reading.

I feel like it's better if the main character's name has two characters, otherwise it's a bit hard to read 😥, Li Shi, Li Mo, Li Shi Mo...

The book is good, definitely worth reading, but how did it get put on the shelves so quietly? 😁