Kill the Mountain with a Sword

First of all, the writing style is good, and secondly, it can be seen that he has writing skills, but the opening and writing rhythm are not in line with the refreshing rhythm of online articles, which is suitable for middle-aged people like me. Secondly, the author himself should be a fan of Western fantasy (it can be seen from the author's pen name, Drizzt Do'Urden), and his writing is very similar. However, the Dark Elf Trilogy and Dragonlance Heroes are both works with a long history. It is recommended that the author needs to make some adjustments. Again, from the perspective of rhythm, the plot is getting better and better. It is a slow-burning work (I don't know how many chapters and words the author plans to have). If it is a novella, the rhythm should be okay. Finally, I hope to stick with it. After all, I think the protagonist looks like Tanis, and Shi Yue also looks like the golden moon. These are all classic images. They were created so that I, an old Western classic fantasy lover, can identify with it, so I think it is a success. Come on.