Natural Disaster Burning Evil

The description of details is sufficient and detailed, and the sense of immersion is strong. The fighting is the highlight, and the updates are stable. Recommended!

The hand-to-hand combat and melee combat are very immersive, but there is one drawback. I wonder if the author noticed it. When you write about the angle of combat in each chapter, you will involuntarily write one word, "tricky". You can absolutely stab with the left, chop with the right, cut horizontally, lift from behind, etc. The word "tricky" appears too many times. Maybe I read it once and I only remember this word too often.

From the beginning of school to now, I have read a lot of books, all kinds of books, no matter the subject, I just like to read books. Many years later, I also want to write a book, which can be regarded as my dream. Whether it is a western fantasy time travel, a modern war, or a historical song, it is all a heart-warming adventure. Readers who have read this book, I am very happy to meet you and have the honor to experience this adventure with you. Thank you!

Dear friends, if you have any questions in the book, please feel free to ask them. After all, no matter how careful you are when you check it, you may skip it due to habitual thinking. I will not delete or lock posts, but will face up to the problem. Thank you for your support.

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The background of the plot is the medieval warhammer and sword legend

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How is the author's current performance? I feel that it is not exciting enough and is a bit depressing. If you don't seek to make more money with code words and are adapting Western fantasy TV series, the writing is very good, the artistic content is high, and it is not commercial enough.

The article is really good, good luck to the author. I liked it very much and read it very slowly. Your article made me willing to read it word by word to understand the story you wanted to say. A bit of a selfish request... Can there be illustrations when introducing weapons, special equipment, and characters? I will be willing to reward more because of this, and I will feel particularly deeply involved 🙂

Really good. Come on, author

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It's a very traditional Western fantasy style, which feels a bit low on Wu's worldview. The writing is very delicate, even a little too refined. However, as other comments have said, the seemingly exquisite writing is actually a bit stereotyped and repetitive, and a bit formulaic. In fact, part of the reason is that there are some problems with your plot design, there are too many battles, and the plot is a bit delayed, but overall it is okay. Even though the plot is a bit too tight, I still recommend relaxing it a bit. (Small plots follow one after another, but the progress of the big plot is slow.) Also, off topic, I wonder if there is a chance to write a female protagonist? How many? I thought it was Melta at first, but I didn't say goodbye to the interaction when I left the novice village. . .

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So far, the writing is good. I just read it and forgot to invest in new books.

Day one. New book, new starting point, come on!

I feel that the writing is quite good, a bit like a realistic Western fantasy novel, but I don't know whether the protagonist will have magic or other things later. In addition, it took me a while to realize the battle between the mountain people. If the count sends a hundred-man heavy armored elite infantry, I feel that I can pass this mountain dungeon without any damage 🙂. The Black Crow Mercenary Group only has 66 people, and most of them are in light armor. It is difficult to gather 300 people after the youthful vitality of various tribes in the mountains were severely injured, and most of them are in leather armor, just like the difference between local armed forces and the official regular army.

Does the author have any other books? This is not enough.

Don't worry, if it's good, I'll vouch for it. If it's not, you'll scold me. If there's a problem in a chapter later, I'll post it and mark it below. If it's not posted, it means there's no problem yet.

It's a bit too drawn out and too slow. Some places spend too much time describing

More updates, come on

There is a fee for more than 50 chapters, awesome

Finished? 😰