Gou Cultivates Immortality in a Strange World

I don't see the use of this golden finger. . The things being replaced are currently things that others already own. The question lies here, is this a story about ordinary people struggling to survive in a strange world? Just like the ancient Internet articles about luck being against the sky, shopping at street stalls to buy forbidden magic, and eating sweet potatoes to get full magic power. They are directly attributed to luck, and you are saving points to exchange them.

This protagonist is being plotted all the time, which is very annoying. Author, you know that the protagonist is being plotted and will get benefits beyond expectations in the future, but the readers don't know that he is being led around all the time, and he is completely passive.

After looking at the front part, I think it's okay, but there are still two points that really affect my perception. The first is that many plots in the story are too deliberate, and the characters are not natural. In order to pave the way for the readers of the third wall to set up various settings of the story, many supporting characters' words and deeds are not very natural. For example, in order to popularize various background settings for the protagonist and readers, they say everything to the protagonist, and the protagonist got it a second ago. Pill, the supporting character couldn't help but ask in the next second that this is a pill with some effect. No matter how different the status and class are from the protagonist, or how long they have been together, all kinds of secret knowledge and various memories with previous settings are all told to the protagonist. Why, everyone is warm-hearted and big-mouthed? You haven't met many people before? The words and actions of the supporting characters are not very natural. The second thing is, Gou Daoliu, why didn't I see it? Isn't this genre a genre in which the protagonist has limited intervention in danger, and relies on time and plug-ins to steadily grow little by little? The protagonist does not feel that the protagonist has limited intervention in danger. In front of it, he can be reincarnated several times in a hurry. Isn't this a traditional way for various events to constantly find the protagonist?

After following the update, the overall rhythm is slow, and the settings of Goldfinger are not yet eye-catching. However, the smoothness of the story is still online, and it is completely readable. I will continue to follow up with more support in the future! Great support from the author and looking forward to further efforts~🙂

As soon as the protagonist arrives, strange things happen frequently.

I don't see what's wrong! It's all calculated

I have started to practice immortality, and I no longer feel weird.

The damn eunuch hasn't come back yet? 😡

Looking at the introduction, it doesn't work this way or that way. What's the point of patrolling the river? Haven't watched it yet

It lacks logic, it's a bit like a white paper. The author doesn't even understand the simplest question of whether to use people or not. Or tell him directly and go to Temptation Weird. Taking this elixir can increase the probability of seducing ghosts, and it can also provide you with great benefits. Either you go home and have no one to protect you, and you may die directly. Let him choose. This is the basic logic of power. Either tell him the truth and let him choose, or lie to him and kill him directly after the mission is over. There is no middle option. There is no saying that after I finish using you, I will continue to increase your value. If you become stronger in the future, come back and kill me. Which leader is so stupid?

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It's good-looking, a bit like a horror world of cultivating immortals. I hope the author won't be a eunuch.

It's over, it's over, such a good book has stopped updating again. If you continue writing, it will definitely become popular. Stopping updating at this time will make it less popular.