Hong Kong Island: the Demons Are Dancing Wildly, I Suppress Them with One Hand

This could have been abandoned, there is no need to fall into the trap, but the author started to cheat again. Finally, when he wrote about the pain of youth, he ended up writing about Fang Hui, who had been aborted by Kuang Qiang.

In this book, the author should not engage in the kind of plot of giving away girls. The first two books have it. After the protagonist wants to eat, he sends the girl to another man, and then takes it back later. This half-green plot really irritates readers.

I suspect Brother Tao sold his account! This one doesn't taste like Mu Mentao brother at all! Since when did Brother Tao respect his teacher? ! Normally, shouldn't Brother Tao learn the Nine-Yang Magic and kill Huo Gong Tutuo? ?

The more you write, the more rubbish you get. . . . . A pick-up man is like a prostitute who spent a lot of money and thought he was a scumbag.

What is the hook🔟? Let's not talk about collecting a bunch of broken shoes and running to Tianlong to be a beggar. I don't want to

I suggest changing the title of the book, because now many people born in the 2000s have started to join the army of online writers. For these people, Hong Kong movies are equivalent to the ancient times. The people born in the 80s and 90s have feelings for Hong Kong movies. Since they entered the cinema, the people born in the 2000s have basically been exposed to domestic entertainment. Many Hong Kong stars have never been heard of, not to mention seen.

You are so suitable for writing a painful youth love drama. Once you get in, you can do all kinds of magical things, and then you can do whatever you want with the male and female protagonists. You can also accept the female protagonist, and the characters are quite interesting. The most important thing is that you are not writing meal replacements. Find more youth dramas with good female protagonists to write, and don't just take off.

The old book is quite good, don't finish it 😢

It's been so long since it's been on the shelves. I didn't expect to finish it. Let's continue writing this kind of fanfiction. I can't stand the others. It really has to be Mmentao who is interesting, and the heroine is also well written every time. Her character is a bit sketchy, but she is also very cute and sincere.

I had a premonition that Brother Tao was going to cut him off! Brother Tao doesn't understand politics at all, but he still has a dream of becoming an emperor! If you don't rush into the street, there will be ghosts.

The cuckold-addicted protagonist only accepts the tattered shoes that others have played with, and even his b*tch has been kicked to pieces by others. The protagonist is treated as a treasure.

I feel that the author is not suitable for this kind of writing style. Basically, the readers of the author are gentlemen! Positive readers! I can't stand the slow upgrade! Everyone still likes to see fun people and beautiful women!

Both of them are martial arts-oriented, and the urban modern ones will last a long time. Brother Tao, come back soon

The plot of "Huihunye" is too long, and the protagonist has to rush around and crawl around. It completely loses the flavor of Brother Tao who takes the girl calmly and unrestrainedly. Yitian's previous writing was quite good, but the two chapters of "The Battle at Guangmingding" were too original. The protagonist was replaced by Zhang Wuji.

This author is really amazing. The heroines in all his books and in all the worlds he travels through all have the same character and speak in the same tone. The protagonist comes up to flirt with him a few words, and then the heroine inexplicably falls in love with him to death. Especially in the urban world, they are exactly the same. In the end, they all emigrate abroad themselves or their descendants. As for this, some people praise him for writing about the urban world well.

Why do you feel that the one I wrote is not as good as the other one? Has someone changed?

The beginning is quite confusing 😒

Mule still refuses to give up his martial arts dream! I get punched by my girlfriend every day at home! Writing a book has its ups and downs! It's better to abandon this book and re-read it.

Isn't it too messy and too fast to write like this? It's just a plot? Outline

When will the author publish a new book? It's very urgent.

When will the new book be released? I sent it to Laoshu and let me know.

Why hasn't there been any news about the new book? Hurry up and publish a new book.

Where's the new book? Where's the new book? The mule has rested long enough. It's time to pull it out and run around. This won't be the last one.

When do you enjoy listening to books?

Brother Tao has no new books? ? ? ?

🙄🙄I highly suspect that Big Mule changed his name, changed his vest and started a new book, but I have no evidence!

No new books? 😐

When will the author release a new book?

What happened to the author? Get the new book soon

Tomato's author's name is also Luo