Across the Heavens: The Ashes Descend

The author hopes the story won't be like your previous book, *Chat Groups: The Black-Hearted Emperor and the Chosen Foreman*, where adding Eastern cultivation elements felt incredibly out of place. It's originally a Western story; forcing in Eastern cultivation elements just doesn't feel right!

The first book I made was about toilets. The second book has already reached the next star sector and is still not finished. What about this third book 🙂? Are we going to go to the cesspool to catch people to burn? Anyway, burning a few more souls won't make a difference.

The world moves a little too fast; just when you feel something is interesting, it's gone.

Wow! My heart skipped a beat when I read that the author thought rifle bullets couldn't penetrate medieval plate armor at a distance. Oh my god, that's terrifying!

I'm not asking you to necessarily preach any ideology or doctrine in your book, but if the protagonist is truly a pragmatist, they shouldn't be bothered by the questionable aspects of the system. Instead, they should use whichever brings them advancement—earning money from both the scoundrels and the good guys, and then using that money and acquired skills to conquer the world, instead of…

In this world of Dark Souls, if Xiao Gao hadn't turned into a monster, would the protagonist have forced him to recall and experience things like, "Xiao Gao's childhood in the story... The door can't be opened from this side... You need to go down to Hell to find the key... There's a Three Dogs God-Slaying Formation on the way to school (summoning three wolf knights from the Dark Souls world to block the road)..."?

The tragic protagonist is named Li Wei. This protagonist's name is exclusive to the studio. I've never seen any of their completed works use it. Calling Shennong?

Add more appearances to the ranks of several subordinates with fixed names. If you've never played Dark Souls, you'll see a bunch of people coming and going, and all you see are descriptions of their classes, so you can't remember who they are.

The image of a plate-armored mage battling mechs, like in Code Geass, is particularly comical. He also possesses some supernatural abilities; he can even burn away the strange world consciousness of that world. It can also wholesale modern weapons and energy, and is suitable for large-scale killing.

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