Hunter X Hunter: My Nen Beast Is Powerful

The introduction looks a bit baffling!

The introduction is so bad, and it also writes a difficult hunter fanfic. Doesn't this clearly tell readers that this is a piece of shit?

This link is quite interesting, but the writing is very strange. When he was being chased, he didn't summon the mind beast if he had money, but returned the money to the driver first. When fighting against the brigade, it was only possible to defeat the enemy with both legs. The brigade wants to steal the protagonist's ability, and they will negotiate as much as they say.

Writing really depends on talent. I see that the author has written several books, but there are no results and slow progress. I feel that I can't make a living in online writing 😅

The main name is not good, and it sounds so confusing because of the rhythm.

The combat power is too vague. Tsunade and Shippuden's Kakashi are about the same strength? Orochimaru relied on his chakra to suppress Kakashi and couldn't move. Tsunade's strength is not much weaker than Orochimaru. She has no problem beating Shukaku, but the Shukaku you wrote is twice as powerful as Tsunade.

I finally found a hunter fanfic, but this is the result I really don't want to read it

I didn't even read the author of this plot and knew it was you.

The writing style is too colloquial. Author, you need to strengthen your expression skills.

Wouldn't it be better to write Nianmon as a Pokémon?