Greater Germany: The Rise of the Habsburgs

Pig's Foot is almost 50 years old and has no children. In the 19th century, the average life expectancy was more than 40 years old, and the countdown to death had already begun. Although nobles live a long life, many plots cannot be developed. It is recommended to restart the novel and write about a young man in his 20s.

I'm really convinced, why don't you ask Daqing to let him explode some gold coins?

At the beginning of the 10th chapter, I don't know the situation of Pig's Foot, what it was like before the time travel, and what it was like after the time travel. In addition to being an emperor after time traveling, there is no brief description of how old Pig's Foot is, whether he has a wife, children, the country's territory, finance, diplomacy, military situation, etc. How do you want the readers to read on? Should the readers check the information themselves according to the year you provided? Time, place, characters, events, and the four elements of primary school composition are all you can't understand, and why are you saying that no one is reading them? Find out why.

It's been a while since I've seen anything about Habsburg. There's actually quite a lot of material about Austria in the 18th century. I hope it doesn't go into the palace.

It's well written, great, mainly because it's free of charge

Crazy, the capital has been captured and the king has been captured. Isn't it already defeated at this time? As a result, the king put it back and continued to fight? Simply sick

Double time-travelers are ugly. Those who write results are fathers and sons who have time-traveled together. But what you wrote is a time-traveler who has time-traveled into the son of your time-travel identity. This sentence is awkward to write and difficult to read, and it cannot be substituted for a lifetime of struggle for another time-traveler who has no intersection with your previous world to take over.

The writing is very good, and I also like the pace. I feel like I have to change the prince to be the protagonist. The protagonist is too old now. If I change the prince, I can write it until the end of World War II.

A new book of 970,000 words has been put into storage.

It looks good now, but it's really weird not to have children of your own. If not, just write that queen off. She must have her own children, otherwise it won't be too poisonous.