Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: From the Start, I Have a Void Archives
斗罗绝世：开局一枚虚空万藏
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
528Chapters
30Votes
1.3kRecs
19.7kFans
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Reader comments 20
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The destruction of the prison is really miserable. The only one who is willing to reform the God Realm instead of running away to avoid responsibilities. He wants to expand the God Realm and give people in the lower world a chance to become gods. Who would have thought that he would encounter a deus ex machina and a brainless wife! The only good thing is that there are seven loyal first-level gods under his command. The first-generation saboteur is probably the same, but the second-generation saboteur Zhou Weiqing is only 25 years old. Rakshasa and the fallen Thunder God may also have something to do with destruction. One is clearly against Shura, and the other's ability is too close to destruction.
There is a problem with the introduction
It caters too much to Otto's famous scenes and ignores the original plot of Peerless, which is mainly unattractive.
Doesn't Huo Yuhao hate his father very much? Why are you talking about his father? Shouldn't it be his girlfriend?
The dialogue is messy
Please take the time to read your book from beginning to end. There are many dialogues or psychological conversations without any punctuation marks, which is very uncomfortable to watch!
It feels like the main character can't speak and is very out of touch. Is it a problem with the writing style?
There is no desire to watch.
There are hundreds of millions of zombies competing for Douluo's rice bowl, and there are so many tricks. As a Bengsan player, Bengsan Void Manzo
Take the Snow Emperor and the Ice Emperor, and Tang Ya
To be honest, I feel that things that are slightly stronger in Douluo will either be nerfed or speed-passed. The control of writing Douluo is really difficult to master. If you write it too well, you can speed-run it in one go. If you write it too weakly, it will lose the expressiveness of the original work.
I hope the author can revamp the dialogue, especially the dialogue with the protagonist's grandfather. It's very uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist has no manners at all.
The author won the rematch with his elbow🤭