
People Are Scared in the United States, Double-Wearing the Witcher
人在美恐,双穿猎魔人
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 113k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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882Recommends
15Fans
43Chapters
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I just want to ask if we can add less Chinese elements to it.
Too much foreshadowing
Is it fun to be passive all the time?
After reading more than ten chapters, the foreshadowing is too long. There are a lot of things that are missing. So far after reading Chapter 14, the protagonist has no ability to protect himself at all, and the golden finger has not been fully activated. And the things the author describes, such as participating in a debate competition, are full of vampires, jungle witches and so on. There is a ghoul next to me, and when I go to a pet club, I actually encounter a transformed wolf-dog. Let's just make the golden finger simpler and make a panel that can travel to the wizarding world, just like playing a game. Does it have to be so troublesome? Forget it, come on, author.
The writing looks uncomfortable, there are a lot of unnecessary descriptions, use less AI
There have been a lot of talented people in the starting point recently. There are Ben Jiu Shu who wears Constantine, and Geralt who goes to the main god space. I will take a look at this one first.
Can you change what you wrote using AI? Chapter 1 Chapter 2
The fight was too long-winded.
Can you write strange things? So popular now
It's too watery, the protagonist isn't invincible enough, and it's not exciting enough 🪖🪖🪖
It was okay before Chapter 10, but starting from Chapter 10, I felt like it was slipping. The Witcher system, the world of American TV series, the behavior pattern of the protagonist is also based on that, but Chinese elements are added to the equipment, and the style of painting is a bit inconsistent. After that, the protagonist added a lot of inner drama to himself, added a lot of inner drama to the dog, and added additional settings. The change was too sudden, and the style of the painting felt sudden.
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