England, from Charterer to Victorian Godfather

I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 32. The plot is very smooth and the writing is good, but the plot is too slow and the conflict is not too strong. Nowadays, readers have a higher threshold for fun. No matter how good the writing is, it's useless if you can't keep up the fun. And the author always adds private goods.

It is well written, and it is quite descriptive of the life of common people and poor people in the Victorian period. As for some readers saying that the pace is slow, I don't think the pace is quite good. It's just that there are too few updates now, and there is only one update in the past few days. I hope there can be more updates 🙂

After reading 8 chapters, the writing is online, the IQ is online, and the background of the era is attractive enough. It was just one point that made me go from reading in detail to reading ten lines at a time, and then I will talk about it later. Little Dora, Little Dora, Little Dora, Little Dora is too frequent. You obviously have writing skills. Why do you want me to always watch the dialogue of coaxing children and a lot of psychological descriptions of children? I clicked on this character at the beginning and it seemed good when he came out. But the introduction is still too long. The correct approach should be to point out the characters and gradually enrich the characters' personalities and backgrounds as the plot develops. Instead of appearing all the time, should we watch Wes's Road to Quan Fist or Dora's Adventures of Dora? I'd also like to add a little

When I read Chapter 35, the previous chapters were fine, but in the slums the book changed. The protagonist looked like an angry youth, which was embarrassing. Another literary youth flavor hit my face. I had to write so many sentences about the British society that eats people without spitting out their bones, and also said that the protagonist has woken up and is living in Bengbu. In my opinion, the protagonist seems to have degenerated. He doesn't care for himself, and he will be punished by heaven and earth. Before he had very powerful energy, you can't figure out what era, when, and what should be done.

The author wanted to put some of his personal stuff into this book, and every step of the way he wanted to mix in some thoughts. It was so complicated and torn that it looked a bit like an angry youth complaining. The problem is that you chose Britain in the 18th century. The upper class society should be very luxurious. People at the bottom also look at race. If you check the information, you will know that white people have a natural sense of superiority. The Empire on which the sun never sets is still shining. Even if you live in poverty, you should not be as miserable as the bottom. There are many colonial people living in every corner of the British Empire.

I just finished reading the free chapter. There are 50 unfinished chapters of Selling a Mop. The effective plot in each chapter is only a few sentences. The whole process is forced to do nothing. There are large sections of dialogue that have nothing to do with the story. There is no need to subscribe to this broken book. Tai Shui

It's so touching. Stay steady and don't wave. It's a gift from a great god.

I have read Chapter 32 and have passed 50% of the book. The 90,000 words are close to 100,000 words. The first day of the protagonist has not passed yet. To be honest, your pace is too slow. The author should adjust it. With your pace, basically no one will follow it 😴

Obscure writing style, empty thoughts, redundant literary sentiments, but lack of content.

The third golden chapter is long and verbose, with no useful information at all. Little Dora mentions it over and over again. Isn't it boring?

😃We shouldn't add Chinese people. When I saw the two people who appeared, I knew we had to prepare for harmony.

Brothers, the author deleted the review before because there was a person in my post who was very aggressive and said some bad words. It was not because of the evaluation of the book. Don't misunderstand the author. The book is of a good level and can be read, but the comments are really outrageous.

Every chapter is lame, and the plot progresses like an old lady's footband. The more I read, the more I couldn't understand it, so I gave up.

There are too many verbose things in this article! This book is ruined right here! The author is really speechless! The book is obviously good! But the results are not good! Are you looking for the reason? So weird

The book is a good book, but the trend is a bit skewed now. If you go to a club, just go to the club. You have to write about a princess. Forget it if the fox pretends to be the tiger. You wrote the princess so innocently and sympathized with the lower class? Are you hoping for reform after the princess takes the throne? Then capitalist reforms will continue to continue the constitutional monarchy? If you really want to write it this way, the power of the book will be completely lost! If you want to enjoy it, just enjoy it to the end. Don't discuss social reforms, just copy novels about business and technology. If you want to write in depth, be more pure and describe less of the princess's sympathy for the lower class. If you want both, it will appear neither fish nor fowl. Anyway, I quite like this book so far. After all, there are too few novels that discuss social reform as the theme. But you must be firm in your revolutionary beliefs! Old iron! By the way, time in the novel flows too slowly. Come on! This grade is low for you now.

Chirp Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai Mo Chi Chi Chirp, the Holy Mother saves the world?

When I saw Chapter 6, I spent most of the chapter describing little Dora's psychological activities and behavior after hearing the strange noise. I was so spartan, could you please restrain yourself? Forget it, it's definitely not my cup of tea. Goodbye.

There is nothing exciting about it. It stops in place and rubs it repeatedly, showing off skills throughout the process, but it is also carried out in the dark. It has been dozens of chapters and it is all squeaking. The sea, you are all water.

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Later, you can go to Australia to establish your country. Why isn't the pattern bigger? If you don't rebel during time travel, you will die and be buried in the ground?

Currently, 46 chapters have been updated, covering various things that happened in one day. One day/46 chapters is too long, really too long. Quickly recall the content of the Chinese language class "Lin Daiyu Enters Jia's Mansion" in the first year of high school. The content and structure of the novel must be detailed and detailed. Rather than going into details, it's too tiring to read.

I thought it was a bad work until I saw the paid chapters... It felt too fragmented. I came here for the introduction, but after reading dozens of chapters, there was no mention of the famous tenants. It kept repeating how miserable the people of the times were. Well, it's okay to sell mops to make a living. The part about selling mops to the Navy and Faraday made me feel comfortable, and I finally felt like I was showing off. But the next ten chapters after chapter 28 keep repeating the suffering of the British poor and the protagonist's sarcastic and angry mentality. I can understand that this is the background introduction of the work, but can this kind of plot introduction be written less? I took a look at the skipped chapters and found that it had no effect on the plot 😒 If this is the case even for paid chapters, wouldn't it be a loss to order? Everyone is here to read the story, not to see the author vent his emotions...

I'm really tired from reading this book. I regret clicking in.

I don't know why so many people criticize idealists, and some even criticize human relations and love. Maybe it's a little embarrassing to write about caring for little Dora. Isn't it a traditional virtue to respect the elderly and love the young? Seeing the suffering people at the bottom, broken down, angry and helpless, isn't this a mortal's struggle against darkness? I just want to see someone who can be bright in this darkness. If you don't want to see it, don't see it. Why keep saying evil things?

After three hundred chapters, things finally got better. The content of the plot increased and it became less lyrical.

The way of dialogue and description is really weird, and it always jumps out half-sentences. After writing half a sentence, press Enter and write another half sentence on the next line. Listening to the book makes people collapse.

It's a good book in terms of some plots, but it's too tiring to read in sections, and the author always starts to go crazy for no reason and wastes the number of words.

Author, you are also from Henan. Where did you see the material for the British series? Where can I learn some of this, in the world? Where does your material library come from?

Come on